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Rettelse (nutid)
30. september 2007 af
sukkertrold-xD (Slettet)
Står denne her tekst i nutid/ har nemlig prøvet at skrive den i nutid:
A man needs money, end he will get them by killing another human being. what does he do? He knows that taxi drivers often drive around with much money, and that you can make them drive you wherever you want. An evening he takes a taxi in the middle of the city and asks the driver to drive him to a deserted way, where he knows there isn´t long way to the railway. Suddenly he asks the driver to stop. Then he hit him from behind, empty his pocket and then walks to the station. His plan is to take to London ten minutes later. But at the station everything goes wrong for him. He attracts the attention of other people alone by his appearance, there is blood all over his clothes and he seems upset. People are stirring at him and he tries to hide behind a little shed. Now the train comes rolling into the station, he wants to climb aboard but he can´t becaause there are too many people and he doesn´t like too stand so close to strangers it makes him dizzy. He turns his back to the train waiting for the next. About ten minutes after he commits the crime, a police car discovers it. He can now look forward to many years in prison.
A man needs money, end he will get them by killing another human being. what does he do? He knows that taxi drivers often drive around with much money, and that you can make them drive you wherever you want. An evening he takes a taxi in the middle of the city and asks the driver to drive him to a deserted way, where he knows there isn´t long way to the railway. Suddenly he asks the driver to stop. Then he hit him from behind, empty his pocket and then walks to the station. His plan is to take to London ten minutes later. But at the station everything goes wrong for him. He attracts the attention of other people alone by his appearance, there is blood all over his clothes and he seems upset. People are stirring at him and he tries to hide behind a little shed. Now the train comes rolling into the station, he wants to climb aboard but he can´t becaause there are too many people and he doesn´t like too stand so close to strangers it makes him dizzy. He turns his back to the train waiting for the next. About ten minutes after he commits the crime, a police car discovers it. He can now look forward to many years in prison.
Svar #1
30. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)
Ja, den står i nutid med mange fejl.. Ret sjusket sat op.
Men den står i nutid.
Men den står i nutid.
Svar #3
30. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)
A man needs money, end (and) he will get them by killing another human being. what (What) does he do? He knows that taxi drivers often drive around with much money, and that you can make them drive you wherever you want. An evening he takes a taxi in the middle of the city and asks the driver to drive him to a deserted way, where he knows (that) there isn´t long way to the railway. Suddenly he asks the driver to stop. Then he hit (hits) him from behind, empty his pocket and then walks to the station. His plan is to take (the train) to London ten minutes later. But at the station everything goes wrong for him. He attracts the attention of other people alone by his appearance, there is blood all over his clothes and he seems upset. People are stirring (staring) at him and he tries to hide behind a little shed. Now the train comes rolling into the station, he wants to climb aboard but he can´t becaause (because) there are too (to) many people and he doesn´t like too (to) stand so close to strangers it makes him dizzy. He turns his back to the train waiting (and waits) for the next.
Ten minutes after //he commits//(committing) the crime, a police car discovers it. He can now look forward to many years in prison.
Ten minutes after //he commits//(committing) the crime, a police car discovers it. He can now look forward to many years in prison.
Svar #5
30. september 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
Jeg har ikke kigget teksten igennem, men jeg fik lige øje på denne fejl i første linje.
he will get them --> he will get it (money er altid ental)
he will get them --> he will get it (money er altid ental)
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