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Oversættelse - hjælp søges tak
08. oktober 2007 af
Jitterbug (Slettet)
Hej, jeg skal aflevere en oversættelse om Shakespeare fra dansk til engelsk. vil I ikke være søde at rette den igennem? På forhånd tak
Dansk:
Vi ved ikke meget om Shakespeares liv. Han kommer fra den lille provinsby Stratford, som ligger ved Avon. Faderen var håndværker, og han var medlem af byrådet; i tre år var han også borgmester. Shakespeare har sikkert gået i Stratford Grammar Scholl, som stadig kan ses i byen, men vi ved ikke meget om, hvad han lærte i skolen.
I 1582, da han var 18 år gammel, giftede han sig med Ann Hathaway, som var 7-8 år ældre; hun var ældste datter af en velstående landmand. Deres første barn blev født året efter, kun seks måneder efter brylluppet; senere fik de også tvillinger. Der er flere forklaringer på, hvorfor Shakespeare rejste til London, men de fleste forklaringer er anekdoter fra senere tid. Nogle forskere mener, at han blev medlem af et teaterselskab, der var på besøg i Stratford.
Første gang, vi hører om ham igen, er i 1592, og på det tidspunkt er han en kendt person i London. Han er mest kendt som skuespiller og som skuespilforfatter, men han var også ejer af Globe Teatret.
Min oversættelse:
We do not know much about Shakespeare’s life. He comes from the small provincial town of Stratford, which lies on Avon. The father was a workman and he was a member of the town council; for three years he was mayor as well. Shakespeare has probably gone to the Stratford Grammar School, which can still be seen in the town, but we do not know much about what he learned in school.
In 1582, when he was 18 years old, he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older; she was the elder daughter of a wealthy farmer of substance. Their first child was born the year after, only six months after the wedding; afterwards they got twins as well. There are several explanations to why Shakespeare went to London, but most of the explanations are anecdotes from a later time. Some research workers think that he became a member of a theatre company, which was on a visit to Stratford.
The first time we hear about him again, is in 1592, and at that time he is a well-known person in London. He is most noted for his performing as an actor and as a play writer, but he was also owner of the Globe Theatre.
Dansk:
Vi ved ikke meget om Shakespeares liv. Han kommer fra den lille provinsby Stratford, som ligger ved Avon. Faderen var håndværker, og han var medlem af byrådet; i tre år var han også borgmester. Shakespeare har sikkert gået i Stratford Grammar Scholl, som stadig kan ses i byen, men vi ved ikke meget om, hvad han lærte i skolen.
I 1582, da han var 18 år gammel, giftede han sig med Ann Hathaway, som var 7-8 år ældre; hun var ældste datter af en velstående landmand. Deres første barn blev født året efter, kun seks måneder efter brylluppet; senere fik de også tvillinger. Der er flere forklaringer på, hvorfor Shakespeare rejste til London, men de fleste forklaringer er anekdoter fra senere tid. Nogle forskere mener, at han blev medlem af et teaterselskab, der var på besøg i Stratford.
Første gang, vi hører om ham igen, er i 1592, og på det tidspunkt er han en kendt person i London. Han er mest kendt som skuespiller og som skuespilforfatter, men han var også ejer af Globe Teatret.
Min oversættelse:
We do not know much about Shakespeare’s life. He comes from the small provincial town of Stratford, which lies on Avon. The father was a workman and he was a member of the town council; for three years he was mayor as well. Shakespeare has probably gone to the Stratford Grammar School, which can still be seen in the town, but we do not know much about what he learned in school.
In 1582, when he was 18 years old, he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older; she was the elder daughter of a wealthy farmer of substance. Their first child was born the year after, only six months after the wedding; afterwards they got twins as well. There are several explanations to why Shakespeare went to London, but most of the explanations are anecdotes from a later time. Some research workers think that he became a member of a theatre company, which was on a visit to Stratford.
The first time we hear about him again, is in 1592, and at that time he is a well-known person in London. He is most noted for his performing as an actor and as a play writer, but he was also owner of the Globe Theatre.
Svar #1
08. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Mit forslag:
We do not know much about Shakespeare’s life. He comes from the small provincial town (called) Stratford, which lies on Avon. The father was a workman and he was a member of the town council; for three years he was mayor as well. Shakespeare has probably gone to the Stratford Grammar School, which can still be seen in the town, but we do not know much about what he learned in the school.
In 1582, when he was 18 years old, he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older; she was the elder daughter of a wealthy farmer. Their first child was born the year after, only six months after the wedding. (Later on they also got twins) There are several explanations to why Shakespeare went to London, but most of the explanations are anecdotes from a later time. Some research workers think that he became a member of a theatre company, which (visited) Stratford.
The first time we hear about him again, is in 1592, and at that time he is a well-known person in London. He is (known mostly) for his performing as an actor and as a play writer, but he was also (the) owner of the Globe Theatre.
We do not know much about Shakespeare’s life. He comes from the small provincial town (called) Stratford, which lies on Avon. The father was a workman and he was a member of the town council; for three years he was mayor as well. Shakespeare has probably gone to the Stratford Grammar School, which can still be seen in the town, but we do not know much about what he learned in the school.
In 1582, when he was 18 years old, he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older; she was the elder daughter of a wealthy farmer. Their first child was born the year after, only six months after the wedding. (Later on they also got twins) There are several explanations to why Shakespeare went to London, but most of the explanations are anecdotes from a later time. Some research workers think that he became a member of a theatre company, which (visited) Stratford.
The first time we hear about him again, is in 1592, and at that time he is a well-known person in London. He is (known mostly) for his performing as an actor and as a play writer, but he was also (the) owner of the Globe Theatre.
Svar #2
08. oktober 2007 af Niels_89 (Slettet)
Dette var hvad jeg fandt af rettelser:
Linje 7, det hedder eldest daughter.
Linje 8, tror godt man kan sige "their first child was born the following year".
Linje 12, er ikke sikker, men tror det hedder "and at THIS time he is a well-known...."
Det var hvad jeg kunne finde, er dog ikke 100% sikker, så du må vælge og vrage gennem mine råd.
Ellers ser det rigtig flot ud.
Linje 7, det hedder eldest daughter.
Linje 8, tror godt man kan sige "their first child was born the following year".
Linje 12, er ikke sikker, men tror det hedder "and at THIS time he is a well-known...."
Det var hvad jeg kunne finde, er dog ikke 100% sikker, så du må vælge og vrage gennem mine råd.
Ellers ser det rigtig flot ud.
Svar #3
08. oktober 2007 af Jitterbug (Slettet)
Tusind tak jeres store hjælp begge to :)
Med hensyn til Svar #2 "and at this time he is a well-known..." er jeg meget i tvivl. Nogle der kan hjælpe? Hedder det "at THIS time" eller " at THAT time"?
Med hensyn til Svar #2 "and at this time he is a well-known..." er jeg meget i tvivl. Nogle der kan hjælpe? Hedder det "at THIS time" eller " at THAT time"?
Svar #6
08. oktober 2007 af Chuuula (Slettet)
Ville nok sige:
- HIS father was a workman, a member of the town council and for three years he was mayor as well.
- When he was 18 years old (1582), he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older than he. She was the eldest daughter of a wealthy farmer of substance.
- Their first child was born the following year - only six months after the wedding. Later on, they had twins as well.
Svar #7
08. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
ja, men det er godt nok, en ting kan siges på mange måder, så det er fint, at vi får forskellige bud
Svar #8
08. oktober 2007 af debbief (Slettet)
We do not know much about Shakespeare’s life. He comes from the small provincial town named Stratford, which is near Avon. The father was a workman and he was a member of the town council; for three years he was mayor as well. Shakespeare has probably gone to the Stratford Grammar School, which is still be seen in the town, but we do not know much about what he learned at the school.
In 1582, when he was 18 years old, he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older than him; she was the eldest daughter of a wealthy farmer. Their first child was born the following year, only six months after the wedding. Later on they also had twins. There are several explanations for why Shakespeare went to London, but most of the explanations are anecdotes from a later time. Some research workers think that he became a member of a theatre company, which was on visit in Stratford.
The first time we hear about him again, was in 1592, and at that time he was a well-known person in London. He is mostly known for his performing as an actor and as a play writer, but he was also the owner of the Globe Theatre.
In 1582, when he was 18 years old, he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older than him; she was the eldest daughter of a wealthy farmer. Their first child was born the following year, only six months after the wedding. Later on they also had twins. There are several explanations for why Shakespeare went to London, but most of the explanations are anecdotes from a later time. Some research workers think that he became a member of a theatre company, which was on visit in Stratford.
The first time we hear about him again, was in 1592, and at that time he was a well-known person in London. He is mostly known for his performing as an actor and as a play writer, but he was also the owner of the Globe Theatre.
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