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The history makes me want to holler is about two men, a black and a white. The white mans name is Danny. He is a journalist and has got the nickname Dannyboy by Natthan. The black guys name is Nathan, which nickname is Nate McMann. They 2 guys meet eachother at a job in Wasington which was at the Wasington Post. There they became good friends. Danny moved into the Black neighboordhood which he likes. Nathan and Danny talks about white and blacks musik and a lot about other differences beetwen black and white people. One day Natthan told Danny a big secret that he never had talked about before he went to jail.

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The history "Makes Me Want To Holler" is about two men, a black man and a white man. The black guy's name is Nathan, but he is often called Nate McMann. The white man is named Danny. He is a journalist and has got the nickname Dannyboy by Natthan. The two guys meet each other at The Wasington Post where they become good friends. Danny moves into the Black neighboordhood which he likes very much. Nathan and Danny talk about white and black's music and a lot about other differences beetwen black and white people. One day Natthan tells Danny a secret that he had never told anyone before; He went to jail.

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The story "Makes Me Wanna Holler" is about two men, a black and a white. The white man's name is Danny and he is a journalist. His nickname is Dannyboy, which he has gotten from Nathan. Nathan is the black man, and his nickname is Nate McMann. The two men met each other at their job at The Washington Post, where they became good friends.
Danny moved into the black neighbourhood, which he likes aswell as the people who live there. Nathan and Danny talk about white and black people's music and alot about other differences between black and white people. One day, Nathan tells Danny a big secret. He has never talked about the time before he went to prison.

Du må lige finde ud af, om du mener Natthan eller Nathan. Du skifter en del.