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Rette kort stil på knap 400 ord
26. november 2007 af
Dokie (Slettet)
Hej er der nogle som vil rette dette for mig?
What is justice?
In this text I want to express my feelings about what justice is.
A person who kills another should be punished, but I think that it should be different how many years they should get in prison, because it depends on how they have killed the person. If they for example ran over the person, an it get killed that way, there shouldn’t be any prison involved, but if they do it on purpose they kill a person then they should be punished, but the punishment shouldn’t be “condemned to death” every time, it should really depends on how they have killed the person, and how many. But if it was my son or daughter who was killed, I would wish that he/she who did it was killed ore kill them myself. But I think the police should take consideration for his or her health.
The pushers shouldn’t be jailed because I don’t think it isn’t their fault, because the people who buy it could just stop buying the drugs. I don’t really think the drug dealer should be punished the same way as a murder that shoots a person, I think I should depends on how many gram they have when they get catch by the police. I think that it’s the person who takes the drugs and should quit it, and I think it’s his own fault if he dies of it; the drug dealer is just doing his job, and the person should just have said no from the beginning.
People who’s driving when they’re drunk and kill another person that way, should be punished because they don’t think about what they’re doing when they just jump drunk into a car and drive, I think that they should be jailed a few years because if they weren’t drunk, they would have had it all under control and wouldn’t have killed someone.
I think it’s the same when it’s a person who isn’t drunk, because I think both ways look like each other.
I don’t think it’s fair just to pay a fine in many cases, especially not when you have killed somebody.
I think that all dictators should get killed because they have made so much damage and have killed so many people just because some people want do it their way.
And I don’t think it’s all right that they have atomic weapons, so what they did to Saddam Hussein was all right, because I think that he deserved it. If all dictators were catch I think that there would be more peace in the world. And all I wish could be in the world is PEACE.
What is justice?
In this text I want to express my feelings about what justice is.
A person who kills another should be punished, but I think that it should be different how many years they should get in prison, because it depends on how they have killed the person. If they for example ran over the person, an it get killed that way, there shouldn’t be any prison involved, but if they do it on purpose they kill a person then they should be punished, but the punishment shouldn’t be “condemned to death” every time, it should really depends on how they have killed the person, and how many. But if it was my son or daughter who was killed, I would wish that he/she who did it was killed ore kill them myself. But I think the police should take consideration for his or her health.
The pushers shouldn’t be jailed because I don’t think it isn’t their fault, because the people who buy it could just stop buying the drugs. I don’t really think the drug dealer should be punished the same way as a murder that shoots a person, I think I should depends on how many gram they have when they get catch by the police. I think that it’s the person who takes the drugs and should quit it, and I think it’s his own fault if he dies of it; the drug dealer is just doing his job, and the person should just have said no from the beginning.
People who’s driving when they’re drunk and kill another person that way, should be punished because they don’t think about what they’re doing when they just jump drunk into a car and drive, I think that they should be jailed a few years because if they weren’t drunk, they would have had it all under control and wouldn’t have killed someone.
I think it’s the same when it’s a person who isn’t drunk, because I think both ways look like each other.
I don’t think it’s fair just to pay a fine in many cases, especially not when you have killed somebody.
I think that all dictators should get killed because they have made so much damage and have killed so many people just because some people want do it their way.
And I don’t think it’s all right that they have atomic weapons, so what they did to Saddam Hussein was all right, because I think that he deserved it. If all dictators were catch I think that there would be more peace in the world. And all I wish could be in the world is PEACE.
Svar #1
27. november 2007 af sanne a (Slettet)
her er mit forslag:
What is justice?
In this text I want to express my feelings about what justice is.
A person who kills another should be punished, but I think that it should be different how many years they should get in prison, because it depends on how they have killed the person. If they for example ran over the person, an it get killed that way, there shouldn’t be any prison involved, but if they kill the person on purpose then they should be punished, but the punishment shouldn’t be “condemned to death” every time, it should really depends on how they have killed the person, and how many. But if it was my son or daughter who was killed, I would wish that he/she who did it was killed ore kill them myself. But I think the police should take consideration for his or her health.
The pushers shouldn’t be jailed because I don’t think it is their fault, because the people who buy it could just stop buying the drugs. I don’t really think the drug dealer should be punished the same way as a murder that shoots a person, I think it should depends on how many gram they have when they get caught by the police. I think that it’s the person who takes the drugs and should quit it, and I think it’s his own fault if he dies of it; the drug dealer is just doing his job, and the person should just have said no from the beginning.
People who’s driving when they’re drunk and kill another person that way, should be punished because they don’t think about what they’re doing when they just jump drunk into a car and drive, I think that they should be jailed a few years because if they weren’t drunk, they would have had it all under control and wouldn’t have killed someone.
I think it’s the same when it’s a person who isn’t drunk, because I think both ways look like each other.
I don’t think it’s fair just to pay a fine in many cases, especially not when you have killed somebody.
I think that all dictators should get killed because they have made so much damage and have killed so many people just because some people want it their way.
And I don’t think it’s all right that they have atomic weapons, so what they did to Saddam Hussein was all right, because I think that he deserved it. If all dictators were caught I think that there would be more peace in the world. And all I wish could be in the world is PEACE
What is justice?
In this text I want to express my feelings about what justice is.
A person who kills another should be punished, but I think that it should be different how many years they should get in prison, because it depends on how they have killed the person. If they for example ran over the person, an it get killed that way, there shouldn’t be any prison involved, but if they kill the person on purpose then they should be punished, but the punishment shouldn’t be “condemned to death” every time, it should really depends on how they have killed the person, and how many. But if it was my son or daughter who was killed, I would wish that he/she who did it was killed ore kill them myself. But I think the police should take consideration for his or her health.
The pushers shouldn’t be jailed because I don’t think it is their fault, because the people who buy it could just stop buying the drugs. I don’t really think the drug dealer should be punished the same way as a murder that shoots a person, I think it should depends on how many gram they have when they get caught by the police. I think that it’s the person who takes the drugs and should quit it, and I think it’s his own fault if he dies of it; the drug dealer is just doing his job, and the person should just have said no from the beginning.
People who’s driving when they’re drunk and kill another person that way, should be punished because they don’t think about what they’re doing when they just jump drunk into a car and drive, I think that they should be jailed a few years because if they weren’t drunk, they would have had it all under control and wouldn’t have killed someone.
I think it’s the same when it’s a person who isn’t drunk, because I think both ways look like each other.
I don’t think it’s fair just to pay a fine in many cases, especially not when you have killed somebody.
I think that all dictators should get killed because they have made so much damage and have killed so many people just because some people want it their way.
And I don’t think it’s all right that they have atomic weapons, so what they did to Saddam Hussein was all right, because I think that he deserved it. If all dictators were caught I think that there would be more peace in the world. And all I wish could be in the world is PEACE
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