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jeg er ikke speciel god i engelsk derfor er der ikke nogen der ville hjælpe mig med at rette de større fejl
One of the biggest successes of danish movies is undoubtedly Olsen-Banden. The audience loved the first movie. Both old and young people liked the determined and gifted “Egon”, the boyish dreamer “Benny”, and the constantly concerned and nervous “Keld” with the colourful wife “Yvonne”.
One of the most typically theme of the movie is the little man fighting against the society most powerful . On and on lawyers, speculators, and bigger businessmen are cheating Egon, but with indomitable optimism (is he) refusing (him) to give up. Egon has a plan, a brilliant plan, and if a plan is failing, does Egon have a new plan and a better. Egon does find on the incredibly thing??, and even though he ends behind the jalls heavy gates in the end of every movie, cheat,(is), the clever one cheating anyhow the less clever one, before he ends in the dark jall, do the culprits also have little suffering defeats. Actually the movies loser is not Egon Olsen an Benny and Keld, but the insensitive and powerful, for who fortune and power is more worth than the little mans rights to a decent life.
Den danske version
En af dansk films storste succeser er uden tvivl Olsen-banden. Publikum elskede den første film. Både gamle og Unge syntes om den beslutsomme og begavede Egon, den drengede drømmer Benny, og den konstant bekymrede og nervøse Keld med den farverige kone, Yvonne.
En af filmenes mest typiske temaer er den lille mands kamp mod samfundets mest magtfulde. Gang på gang snyder sagførere, speku¬lanter og større forretningsmænd Egon, men med ukuelig opti¬misme nægter han at give op. Egon har en plan, en genial plan, og hvis en plan mislykkes, har Egon en ny og bedre plan. Egon finder på de utroligste ting, og selv om han ender bag fængslets tunge porte i slutningen af hver film, snyder den kloge alligevel den mindre kloge, for før han ender i det mørke fængsel, har også skurkene lidt nederlag. Filmenes egentlige tabere er ikke Egon Olsen og Benny og Keld, men de følelseskolde og magtfulde, for hvem rigdom og magt er mere værd end den lille mands ret til et anstændigt liv.
Svar #1
31. august 2008 af 28994 (Slettet)
One of the greatest successes in Danish movies is undoubtly Olsen-Banden. The audience loved the first movie. Both old and young people liked the determined and gifted “Egon”, the boyish dreamer “Benny”, and the constantly concerned and nervous “Keld” with the colourful wife “Yvonne”.
One of the most typical themes of the movie is the little man fighting against the society most powerful people . Time and time again lawyers, speculators, and wealthy businessmen cheat Egon, but with indomitable optimism, he refuses to give up. Egon has a plan, a brilliant plan, and if his plan is fails,
he has a new and better plan. Egon comes up with the most incredible ideas, and even though he ends up, locked away behind the prisons heavy gates in the end of every movie, the smart guy cheats the less smart guy, because before he ensds uå in prison, the bad guys have also suffered defeat-
The real losers of the movie are not Egon Olsen, Benny, and Keld but the insensitive and powerful people to whom fortune and power are worth more than the little guys' right to have a devent life.
Jeg har rettet nogen af de lidt mærkelige formuleringer og et par grammatiske fejl.
Der er sikkert fare for fejl i det jeg selv har tilføjet.
Svar #2
31. august 2008 af 28994 (Slettet)
One of Danish movies greatest successes, is witout doubt Olsen-Banden. the audience loved the first movie. Both young and old people liked the resolute and gifted Egon, the boyish Benny and the ever worried and nervous Keld, with the colorful wife Yvonne.
One of the movies typical themes is the little guys' struggle against the most poweful of society.
Time and time again lawyers, speculators, and big businessmen cheat Egon, but with indomitable optimism Egon refuses to give up. Egon has a plan, a genious plan and if that plan fails he has new and better plan. Egon comes up with the most amazing things, and even though Egon ends up behind heavy gates of prison in the end of every single movie movie, the smart one still cheats the less smart one, because before he ends up in the dark prison, the bad guys too have suffered defeat. The true losers of the movies are not Egon Olsen, Benne, and Keld but the insesitive and powerfull people, to whom fortune and power is worth more than the little guys right to a decent life.
lavede lige min egen lille oversættelse af den danske version, den er langt fra perfekt, men det kan være det er noget du kan bruge.
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