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En virkelig flot fyr

Hun mente bestemt, at hun havde set ham før. Hans øjne var grønne, og den smukt formede næse gav ham en usredvanlig profil. Haret var smart klippet og tøjet usædvanlig velsiddende.
Hun tog derfor en rask beslutning: hun spurgte ham åbent, om han ville gifte sig med hende, og da han, i forbløffelse, sagde "Hwa!", gentog hun ligefremt og kækt sit frieri.
Totalt overrumplet over hendes initiativ vidste han ikke, hvad han skulle svare, så han kyssede hende lidenskabeligt, og de levede lykkeligt til deres dages ende.

A really nice guy

She felt certain that she had seen him before. His eyes were green, and the beautifully shaped nose gave him a unusual profile. His hair was smart cut and the clothes unusual (velsiddende).
She took a quick decision: she asked him openly if he would marry her, and when he, in his amazement, said "Hwa!", she Reiterated her (...) proposul .
Total surprise of her initiative, he knew not what he had to respond, so he kissed her passionately, and they lived happily ever after

tak