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lille udkast, ønskes rettes :)
Jeg er enorm dårlig til engelsk ! Derfor håber jeg, at en vil læse mit nuværende udkast igennem og give noget konstruktiv krtik. Tænker mest på sproglige/stavefejl. - på forhånd tak :)
In my essay I want to write about my life in year 2019. I have made many several considerations and reflect on what I will do in this year, where I am and what kind of dreams I had effete. In addition will I try to describe all they question; maybe I bring some more up.
I think or it seems that many girls’ dreams about a groomer’s future such as actors, singers and you name it. But common to all of them, they do not know what it really is! They are forcing themselves. Neither me, nor I don’t care, cause it no matter!
I don’t want to become a model. I don’t want to be like Paris Hilton; oddly enough I have a Chihuahua too. But for very good reasons, not in my handbag! I want to be able to take care of my self and make chooses in my own way.
In 10 years I hopefully have a good education, a great job and maybe I have establish a family? That every one would say. But personally I know that I oppose a great time. It has to be excreting. I wish that I have got a lot of experience who can carry on irreplaceable relationships. I will not be comfortable if I ended up with watching TV every day.
After the Gymnasium, perhaps could I think of make a journey to USA as well could quite another culture attract such as Kina.
It was the story of my life and a suggestion for what it gowned to be.
Svar #1
29. januar 2009 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Jeg retter det værste her, går ikke i detaljer nu:
In my essay I want to write about my life during the year 2019. I have made many several considerations and reflected on what I will do in this year, where I am and what kind of dreams I had effete??. In addition to that I will to describe all these questions; maybe I'll come up with some more.
I think or it seems that many girls dream about a groomer’s future such as actors, singers and you name it. But common to all of them, is that they do not know what it really is! They force themselves. Neither me, nor I don’t care, cause it does not matter!
I don’t want to become a model. I don’t want to be like Paris Hilton; oddly enough I have a Chihuahua too. But for very good reasons, not in my handbag! I want to be able to take care of myself and make chooses in my own way.
In 10 years I hopefully have a good education, a great job and maybe I have establish a family? That is what every one would say. But personally I know that I oppose a great time. It has to be excreting. I wish I had got a lot of experience who can carry on irreplaceable relationships. I will not be comfortable if I ended up watching TV every day.
After the Gymnasium, perhaps I would think of making a trip to the US as well could quite another culture attract such as Kina. Det sidste kan jeg ikke tyde
It was the story of my life and a suggestion about what it gowned to be.
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