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Jeg har valg emnet school shooting. Det er et emne, man ikke skal spøge med. School shooting er sket mange steder i USA. Det er kommet tættere på Danmark, for det er nu sket i både Tyskland og Finland. Nu er det næsten kommet til Danmark efter en trussel på en skole i Odense, og det kunne ske på min skole i Hillerød.
I have chosen the topic school shooting. It is a subject that we should not joke with. School shooting has happened in many places in the USA. It is now come closer to Denmark, it is now happened in both Germany and Finland. Now it's almost come to Denmark after a threat at a school in Odense, and it could happen at my school in Hillerød.
Svar #1
17. maj 2009 af JG0005
I have chosen the topic school shooting. It's a subject that we shouldn't joke with. School shooting has happened in many places in the USA. It's now coming closer to Denmark. It's happening in Germany and Finland now. It has almost come to Denmark after a threat in a school in Odense, and it could happen at my school in Hillerød.
sådan synes jeg det skal være:P
I have chosen the topic school shooting. It is a subject that we should not joke with. School shooting has happened AT many places in the USA. It HAS now come closer to Denmark. It HAS happened in both Germany and IN Finland. It almost happened in Denmark after a threat at a school in Odense, and it could happen at my school in Hillerød.
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Svar #4
18. maj 2009 af Stygotius
I have chosen (the topic) school shootings as my subject. It is (a subject) something that we should not (joke with) take too lightly. School shootings (has) have (happened) taken place (in) many places in the USA. (It is now come closer) They now seem to be coming to Denmark, (it is now happened) So far there have been occurrences in both Germany and Finland. (Now it's almost come to Denmark after a threat at a school) A serious incident with someone threatening people with a gun in Odense on the island of Funen seems to indicate that (, and it could happen at my school in Hillerød) it might very well happen in this country too, -and perhaps even in my own school in Hillerød.
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