hurtigt rettelse!!

Hej, jeg er rigtig dårlige til englesk, og vil vide hvad for nogle problemer jeg har, jeg har ligenu sidet og skrievet en lille tekst, håber i kan hjælpe mig... jeg vil så meget gerne have hjælp til fremgange.. !!

When it were holiday, have I and my cusins from Sweden a deal about to visit them. But I counldnt, because I werent in the mood to take over to them. I´d rather be at home, but my friends want so much to see me. They comed to my house and forced me to come out with  them, they didnt want me to be at home. Siting there and be lazy.

Tak i forhånd