Engelsk
nogen der vil rette engelsk, speciel grammatik
This paper explores gang crime in Denmark and outlines the current problems of gang crime in Denmark, such as hashish market is the current problem of the various gangs. However, the paper also explains what causes juvenile crime, often done in groups, such has been involved various theories about the causes of crime. There have been involved differing views of what it takes to prevent and combat gang crime in Denmark. This has been read various articles and books for the community, to give correct answers to all questions. As a result, there are various plans to combat gang crime in Denmark and different ideologies create disagreement among politicians, that way it becomes harder to handle the problem. Therefore it can be difficult to combat gang crime in Denmark, which would be easier if politicians could meet at one point and do something about gang crime. Conclusion of the three questions shows that there really is a good idea to intervene for the young criminals before they have a miserable future.
Svar #1
15. december 2009 af bimzon (Slettet)
Har selv Engelsk på B-Niveau, og det er lettere end det her... hvor er det lige du er under uddannelse?
Svar #2
15. december 2009 af hacce (Slettet)
min er også på B-niveau , kom til at trykke på c :) men går på hf .
Svar #3
15. december 2009 af hacce (Slettet)
jeg skal bruge den til min sso opg den er meget vigtig. ´håber der er nogen der retter den hurtigst som muligt
Svar #4
16. december 2009 af engelhard (Slettet)
"such as hashish market is the current problem of the various gangs." - prøv at omformulere denne sætning.
"such has been involved various theories about the causes of crime." - igen, jeg forstår godt hvad du mener, men den skal omformuleres. Prøv at bruge et andet ord en such, da du lige har brugt det, og det er vigtigt du varierer dit sprog.
"There have been involved differing views of what it takes to prevent and combat gang crime in Denmark." - Kig på "differing" .. det er ikke det helt rigtige! og du skal nok bruge et andet ord en combat.. Slå bekæmpe op i ordbogen! (Du har skrevet combat flere gange – hvor jeg også synes du skal ændre det)
"This has* been read various articles and books for the community, to give (*) correct answers to all questions." - Tjek lige "this has" for jeg tror du i virkeligheden vil sige "Jeg har læst" ... også mangler der en artikkel foran correct
“Conclusion of the three questions shows that there* really is a good idea to intervene for the young criminals before they have* a miserable future. – Det skal ikke være “there” men “it”, også hedder det ikke på dansk “før de har en ulykkelig fremtid” men “før de FÅR en ulykkelig fremtid” så derfor skal “have” også ændres.
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