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det er et brev jeg skal skrive til Arnold Schwarzenegger. det er om Death penalty.

Dear Arnold Schwarzenegger.

I am going to tell you about my opinion to death penalty.

I will say that is okay because if you see from their point of view what they have done it and it is a good way to give them a death penalty a lethal injection so they can get it and there is no excuse of what they have done it they deserve and need it of their crime. But the judge has to take a big decision and have to think very well about the person need a death penalty because it is not every one who made the crime there is some of them are innocents and death penalty is a big penalty.

But most of them are criminals and psycho´s and it is not good if the judge gave them a short conviction like 2-3 years just so they can get out of the jail and do it again it´s best to give them a death penalty. It is not only best for the people but whole society so the society can rise up again.

And sometime I asked myself. Is there a consequence?
In my opinion I will say yes it does because when the criminal suddenly come out of the jail he will unfortunately not get a perfect future of himself because no one wants to have the criminal and even a job. They will think that when the criminal get the job and stole the money and run away.

There are many other things worse than a rape. Some of them have killed so many people that it is unbelievable, I can’t imagine it. One of them is a man he has kill a mom and a dad and after that he raped a little innocent girl and the girl she cried so much that before she got raped she said I love you Jesus I love you Jesus. But it goes beyond most in women because they are not as strong as men. Many women they sacrifice their own life to save their children life and of course hole family.

I have found some sources in internet one of them is http://www.amnestyusa.org/abolish/index.do
That homepage tells me about death penalty in more details. There are many different death penalties one of them is of course lethal injection, execution of the mentally ill and many other things. In the homepage there is some facts about how the criminal get the lethal injection but in my personally opinion it is okay how they do it because If the judge gives them a short conviction they will get out and destroy the society again.