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John Bell, a famous English British actor, loved children and often took part in their games. As When some of his friends even were havinge a children's party, he informed them that he had a surprise for the kids. He borrowed a fur-lined overcoat by from another actress and she took in the evening it was to take place, in addition he went to the street where of his friends' house stood. At the gate he turned inside out over his coat inside out and put it on. So Then he went up to the house and knocked on the door. Because When the servant opened the door, he whispered quickly: Do not Don't say a word, otherwise you destroy my plan. I do not want to be reported announced. Leave it all to me. Before the girl maid had recovered from his her astonishment, the actor was had reached to the living room door, where he got down on hands and knees and pushed the door open with his head. Then he jumped into the room, as he growled growling "I am a big, big bear," and always while kept keeping his nose down at the ground. He had expected to hear screams and laughter, but instead there was dead silence. He looked up and discovered to his horror that he had gone into the wrong house, and that the only inhabitants were a few older ladies.

John Bell, a famous English actor, loved children and often he took part in their playings. games. As Once, when some of his friends even were about to have a children's party, he informed them that he had a surprise for the kids. He borrowed a fur-lined overcoat by another from some other actress, and she took the evening, in which the party it was to take place, in addition??? he went to the street where his friends' house stood. At the gate he turned his coat inside out over his coat and put it on. So Then he went to the house and knocked on the door. Because When the maid servant opened the door, he whispered quickly, " Don´t Do not say a word, otherwise or you will destroy my plan. I do not want to be reported. Leave it all to me." Before the girl had recovered from his  her astonishment, the actor was had proceeded reached to the door to the living room door, where he got down on went to his hands and knees and pushed the door open with his head. Then he jumped into the room, growling, "as he growled. I am a big, big bear", and always kept keeping his nose to down at the ground. He had expected to hear scream s and laughter, but instead there was dead total silence. He looked up and discovered to his horror that he had gone into the wrong house, and that the only inhabitants were a few older ladies.

hvilken skal jeg kigge efter ? den første eller anden hm.
 

Andersen har jo nok ret i at det hedder announced i stedet for reported. I sidste linie ville jeg skrive residents i stedet for inhabitants. Ellers kommer du vist ikke galt afsted ved at bruge min. Husk at ved direkte tale bruger man ikke semikolon på engelsk men et komma.

men hvis vi ser på den første linje:
John Bell, en kendt engelsk skuespiller, holdt meget af børn og tog ofte del i deres lege

der skriver andersen , and often took part ...

og du skriver and he took part ..


hm.

Måske kan man begge dele.. skriv det du synes er bedst

Til #5

Det er ikke forkert at indsætte he ; men hvis det gøres, skal det sættes på det rigtige sted : and he often took part ... Jeg undlod he i min version, fordi det sådan set ikke lød forkert i mine ører uden.

#4

Ja, du har ret, residents lyder bedre end inhabitants.