Engelsk
Er kommet i probs :(
18. april 2005 af
Luske! (Slettet)
Hey!
Jeg er kommet i nogle probs... Er kommet for sent igang, og kan desværre ikk nå at få min kammi til at rette mit engelsk, derfor vil jeg høre om der ikk skulle sidde nogle venlige sjæle herinde =)
Spørgsmålet:
Discuss how decent working conditions can best be ensured in the developing countries. You may consider the role of for example consumers, activist organizations, companies, governments and international organizations.
At first they could make some global laws. I am sure they already have, but it seems that they not work as they were meant to. So it could look alike they need some new international laws. Laws which all countries can accept. If there is only one country that not can accept them, you have to make some new laws. Because the one country will observe the laws, the other countries will follow. So it has to be laws that the whole world will observe and respect. When I say the whole world I not only mean the governments. I think also at all the different groups and organizations that have interests in the subject. It can be more than difficult to make laws that all agree to, but you can make some laws that consider the poorest in the world. Then you can make some laws to they rest that consider them in another way. For example can you remove some of their taxes or something like that.
One law could be that the minimum gage could be X per cent of the price of a meal, or something like that. Then the problem will be gone, but the chances to make such a law are quite low, I think.
Otherwise you can have special taxes at goods that come from the rich countries. But then the consumers will be the losers because they will have more expensive goods. But the states would love it. Instead of put taxes at goods from the rich countries you could remove taxes at goods that come from the poor countries. Then the consumers and the poor countries would be happy, but the producers in the rich countries would not like it. They may move their producing from the rich countries to the poor countries, and then the rich countries quick will become poor.
While I have written this, I have realized that this question is almost impossible to consider all parts. There will be some that not will be satisfied. So the world has a problem to solve. But it will properly never be solved, it is simply too hard.
Håber der er nogle som lige har et øjeblik til at hjælpe mig. Det vil blive påskønnet! =)
Jeg er kommet i nogle probs... Er kommet for sent igang, og kan desværre ikk nå at få min kammi til at rette mit engelsk, derfor vil jeg høre om der ikk skulle sidde nogle venlige sjæle herinde =)
Spørgsmålet:
Discuss how decent working conditions can best be ensured in the developing countries. You may consider the role of for example consumers, activist organizations, companies, governments and international organizations.
At first they could make some global laws. I am sure they already have, but it seems that they not work as they were meant to. So it could look alike they need some new international laws. Laws which all countries can accept. If there is only one country that not can accept them, you have to make some new laws. Because the one country will observe the laws, the other countries will follow. So it has to be laws that the whole world will observe and respect. When I say the whole world I not only mean the governments. I think also at all the different groups and organizations that have interests in the subject. It can be more than difficult to make laws that all agree to, but you can make some laws that consider the poorest in the world. Then you can make some laws to they rest that consider them in another way. For example can you remove some of their taxes or something like that.
One law could be that the minimum gage could be X per cent of the price of a meal, or something like that. Then the problem will be gone, but the chances to make such a law are quite low, I think.
Otherwise you can have special taxes at goods that come from the rich countries. But then the consumers will be the losers because they will have more expensive goods. But the states would love it. Instead of put taxes at goods from the rich countries you could remove taxes at goods that come from the poor countries. Then the consumers and the poor countries would be happy, but the producers in the rich countries would not like it. They may move their producing from the rich countries to the poor countries, and then the rich countries quick will become poor.
While I have written this, I have realized that this question is almost impossible to consider all parts. There will be some that not will be satisfied. So the world has a problem to solve. But it will properly never be solved, it is simply too hard.
Håber der er nogle som lige har et øjeblik til at hjælpe mig. Det vil blive påskønnet! =)
Svar #1
19. april 2005 af Fingersen (Slettet)
Her er lidt:
At first(,) /they could make some/ global laws (could be made/laid down).
I am sure /they/(global laws) already have (been made), but it seems that they not work as they were /meant/(supposed) to.
So it could look /a/like /they need/ some new international laws (are needed).
Laws which all countries can accept.
If /there is only/ one country /that/(does) not can accept them, /you have to make/ some new laws (have to be made).
/Because the/(If) one country /will observe/(does not follow) the laws, /the/ other countries will follow (suit).
So it has to be laws that the whole world will observe and respect.
When I say the whole world(,) I (do) not only mean /the/governments.
I (also) think /also at/(of) all the different groups and organizations that have interests in the subject.
It can be more than difficult to make laws that all /agree to/(follow), but you can make /some/ laws that /consider/(apply to) the poorest (countries) in the world.
Then you can make /some/ laws /to they rest that consider/(apply to the rest of the countries) /them/ in another way.
For example(,) /can/ you (can) /remove/(cut away) some of the/ir/ taxes /or something like that/.
One law could /be/(say) that the minimum gage could be /X/(x) /per cent/percentage) of the price of a meal/, or something like that/.
/Then t/(T)he problem /will/(would perhaps then) /be/ go/ne/(away), but (I think that) the chances /to/(of) mak/e/(ing) such /a/ law(s) are quite low/, I think/.
O/therwise/(r,) you c/an/(ould) have special taxes /at/(on) goods that come from the rich countries.
/But then/(However,) the consumers w/ill/(ould then) be the losers because they w(ould)/ill have more expensive/(end up paying more for the) goods.
But the /states/(governments) would love it.
Instead of put(ting) taxes /at/(on) goods from /the/ rich countries(,) you could remove taxes /at/(on) goods /that/ com/e/(ing) from /the/ poor countries.
Then the consumers and the poor countries would be happy, but /the producers/(companies) in the rich countries would not like it.
They /may/(would probably be) mov/e/(ing) their produc/ing/(tion) from the rich countries to the poor countries, and then the rich countries /quick/ w/ill/(ould then quickly) become poor.
While /I have/ writ/ten/(ing) this, I have realized that this /question/(subject) is /almost/ impossible to /consider all parts/(solve with everyone satisfied).
There will (always) be some that (are) not /will be/ satisfied.
So the world /has a/(is facing a) problem /to solve/.
/But it/(A problem that) /will/ properly never be solved/,/(.)
it is simply too hard (to solve).
/.../ = slettes
(...) = indsættes
MVH
Fingersen
At first(,) /they could make some/ global laws (could be made/laid down).
I am sure /they/(global laws) already have (been made), but it seems that they not work as they were /meant/(supposed) to.
So it could look /a/like /they need/ some new international laws (are needed).
Laws which all countries can accept.
If /there is only/ one country /that/(does) not can accept them, /you have to make/ some new laws (have to be made).
/Because the/(If) one country /will observe/(does not follow) the laws, /the/ other countries will follow (suit).
So it has to be laws that the whole world will observe and respect.
When I say the whole world(,) I (do) not only mean /the/governments.
I (also) think /also at/(of) all the different groups and organizations that have interests in the subject.
It can be more than difficult to make laws that all /agree to/(follow), but you can make /some/ laws that /consider/(apply to) the poorest (countries) in the world.
Then you can make /some/ laws /to they rest that consider/(apply to the rest of the countries) /them/ in another way.
For example(,) /can/ you (can) /remove/(cut away) some of the/ir/ taxes /or something like that/.
One law could /be/(say) that the minimum gage could be /X/(x) /per cent/percentage) of the price of a meal/, or something like that/.
/Then t/(T)he problem /will/(would perhaps then) /be/ go/ne/(away), but (I think that) the chances /to/(of) mak/e/(ing) such /a/ law(s) are quite low/, I think/.
O/therwise/(r,) you c/an/(ould) have special taxes /at/(on) goods that come from the rich countries.
/But then/(However,) the consumers w/ill/(ould then) be the losers because they w(ould)/ill have more expensive/(end up paying more for the) goods.
But the /states/(governments) would love it.
Instead of put(ting) taxes /at/(on) goods from /the/ rich countries(,) you could remove taxes /at/(on) goods /that/ com/e/(ing) from /the/ poor countries.
Then the consumers and the poor countries would be happy, but /the producers/(companies) in the rich countries would not like it.
They /may/(would probably be) mov/e/(ing) their produc/ing/(tion) from the rich countries to the poor countries, and then the rich countries /quick/ w/ill/(ould then quickly) become poor.
While /I have/ writ/ten/(ing) this, I have realized that this /question/(subject) is /almost/ impossible to /consider all parts/(solve with everyone satisfied).
There will (always) be some that (are) not /will be/ satisfied.
So the world /has a/(is facing a) problem /to solve/.
/But it/(A problem that) /will/ properly never be solved/,/(.)
it is simply too hard (to solve).
/.../ = slettes
(...) = indsættes
MVH
Fingersen
Svar #2
19. april 2005 af Luske! (Slettet)
Fingersen, jeg bukker og takker. Det var helt super! Tak for det =)
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