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være venlig at hjælpe mig med engelsk stil.
Hej, jeg kom til danmark for ca 4 år siden og mit danske eer ikke so godt. Jeg har fået engelsk stil for og den er virklig svær. Denne stil betyder en del for min fremtid, for vis jeg ikke består engelsk, kan jeg ikke komme ind i gymnasium. Vil i ikke være flinke og rette denne stil for mig, Jeg vil stå så meget i gæld til jer. Nogle af områderne kan være en smule tynd så hvis i har ideer kan i også tilføje dem til. Mange tak for jælpen
Job:
City
Pros:
If your unemployed and in need of and job the city is the place to be: You can become anything you want, from and taxi driver to a succesfull buisnessman. For instance lets say you live in Afghanistan and you are poor. Suddently you hear about something called the american dream. You take the next boat to America with your family, Where do you go? City or Contry? Where do you think you got the best chance of making somethingout of your self? Where do you think you can provide the best for your family? The city. Everything you want to become you can be here. From and low payed taxi driver to a succesfull Buisnessman. From a thief to a druglord.
Cons:
So many people come to the city to get a job and that can create and competition between the unemployed people. The employers look for people with the best edducation and with good manners. Picture your self, that your the employer, you got to papers in your hand. The first paper it says ” James Dean, Harward College”, and the second says ” Abalaberdin ( from afghanistan ), home schooled, grew up in a farm watching goats”. Ofc you pick James Dean, Cause he got the best CV. Lets take the example with the Afghanistan man and his family again. He just got rejected as and editor cause they found a better one. What should the Afghanistan man do? He also got a family to support. The only way now is to do some crime, thats the only way to get money and food on the table. He can either be a drug dealer, thief or work for bad people. Gangsta's and gangs take advantage of guys like the Afghanistan man cause they need money. I think that is also the reason why theres mostly forreigns in Usa jail.
Country:
Pros:
The only job you can have in the country is mostly in a farm. If your lucky and get work in a farm you shouldent fear that someone els is over qualified and gets the job. Working in a farm is mostly about strenght and not brain.
Lets take the exaple with James Dean and the Afghanistan man again. The farm owner got two papers in his hand. The first one says ” James Dean, Harward College”, and the second says ” Abalaberdin ( from Afghanistan ), home schooled, grew up in a farm watching goats”.
Who would you pick? Ofc you would pick Abalaberdin, cause he brought home experience from Afghanistan. As you can see theres a big diffrence working in the city and working in the country. In the city they are more focused on brain, but in the country they are more focused on Strength and experience, but ofc thats from my pointerview, some may think its oppiset or something but this is what I think.
Cons:
It is hard to get because in many cases the farm owner dosent need help. Mostly he got family to help him out. And as days go by technolygi will get better and better and more advanced so you dont need to hire someone cause machines will do most of the work in the farm.
Social life
City
Pros:
You wont get bored once in the city, you can do anything. Tired of life and just wanna get hammered, go to a bar. If you need cloth, theres hundreds of cloth shops. From Gucci to Dolce and Gabanna. Everything you need you can probably find in a mall. I was in USA last year and i went somewhere called Mall of America. You will never find a bigger mall then this. They got everything from resturants to rollercoasters.
If you wanna meet people that are ”diffrent” than you, it cud be and other religion, other culture, diffrent color then the city is the place to be. The city is where people with diffrent backgrounds live and work. You easilier meet new people and its easier to make a busy social life.
Cons:
The city is big and crowded. If your looking for peace this is not the place to be. There will be noise and pollution every single day. You can become the victim of a crime. The city is filled with criminals and gangsters. You gotta be on high alert all the time specialy if you got kids. Kids shouldent go outside alone. They should always have a guardian with them.
Country
Pros:
The country is big and peacefull. If your old this is the perfekt place to be. Its quite and much lesser pollution free then a city. You can do everything you want from naked running to screaming as loud as you can. You dont have to worry about any neighbors cause they probably lives miles away.
The country is beautifull and you will probably get some good memories here. If you have family you can take them hiking or fishing in the lake.
Cons:
For grown ups the country would might be the best place to live but for teenagers and small kids it might get a little boring. Teenagers want to have fun and experience life and not stay at and smelly farm for twenty years. If you live in a country finding a cloth shops and entertainment might lay many miles away. For some they have to drive and hour just to get to the nearest liqur store.
Health and education
City
Pros:
If you get into and accident, then you can call to the ambulance and you can expect it to arrive after 5-10 min. In a city there can be several hospitals and private hospitals. If you got and small disease you can go to the local drug store and buy medicin.
Its so easy to get and nice education in a city. Theres several public schools and universitys. Theres so many schools that you can walk from home to school.
Cons:
Lets say you are at the hospital, cause you have pain in your chest. The waiting time for you to get a doctor to check you out can take up to 4 hours.
Country
Pros:
In the country theres less pollution cause theres not so many cars driving around and theres less industrial plants/factories. Theres more trees and rivers. If you want your kids to run around in open and safe environments, the country is the place to be.
Cons:
If you get into and accident, it can be hard to recive medical attention in time cause theres a possibility that the nearest doctor is 30 min away.
If you want and education and live in a farm, it can take up to one hour to reach the nearest school.
Svar #1
14. april 2011 af rakijovic
Rette kan man vel altid, men hvad får du konkret ud af det? Du ender bare med at stå med det samme problem næste gang du skal forfatte en engelsk tekst. Får du engelskundervisning nu i en eller anden form? Hvis ja, få da din nuværende underviser til at påpege fejlene.
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Svar #2
14. april 2011 af gulidon (Slettet)
Du forstå ikke, hvis jeg ikke består ryger jeg ind på VUC. Jeg er virkelig god til matematik og fysik osv og det har jeg bestået med ren 12 taller. Jeg fik 02 i dansk prøve så hvis jeg ikke får et mindst 7 tal i denne stil dumper jeg, Pllllzzz hjælp mig!
Svar #3
16. april 2011 af marip1 (Slettet)
Der er ikke andet for end at knokle noget mere med det engelske. Der skal desværre rettes en hel del og så ville det ikke længere være din stil. Som rakijovic siger, få hjælp fra din underviser, evt undersøg om der er lektiehjælp i dit lokale bibliotek.
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