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I got 2 interests. They are football and handball.
I used to play handball, but after 1 ½ year, I fractured my left arm.
After that I started to gymnastics.
I used to play left wing. I think it was a little bit difficult, because you have to turn the ball around the goalkeeper, and I couldn’t hold around the ball with my hand. I hope I’m better now, because I’m older, bigger and hopefully stronger. 
I was very sad, that my arm was fractured, because handball was the only sport that I really liked. 
I have tried horseback riding, singing, football and gymnastic, but it was handball there was my sport, so I would like to work on it, and reach my dream about to be the new Mikkel Hansen, and next season I’ll start to handball again. 
I love handball, because it is a very physical hard sport, and you using your body very much. 
I’m not so strong, and after we have had physical education and I had played handball, can I feel that I had made something, and I love that. 

<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height: 115%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA"> My two favorite’s handball teams are AG Copenhagen and Aab.
I think AG Copenhagen is the best team ever, and the team got the best players.
And these two things in one that couldn’t it be more perfect.
My favorite’s players are Mikkel Hansen, René Toft Hansen, Joachim Boldsen, Kasper Hvidt. In brief the whole team.
I use to watch handball match’s and I saw naturally the DM fight between AG Copenhagen and BSV, and after the fight I was very happy, because it was the right team who won the match.  

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I don’t love so much as handball, but I know who I’m cheer on.
As I said before, I have played football, but I think I was too difficult, because you have to hit the ball on a special way, and I wasn’t that good at it.
I dream about to be the new Lionel Messi or the new Fernando Torres, but that is a more an unrealistic dream. But still.
My two favorite’s teams are Chelsea and Denmark.
Denmark because I am supports my country.  And Chelsea because I think they’re very good.
Fernando Torres is my favorite player, because he plays in Chelsea, he has a very good technique and he also looks good.

When I grow up, I would like to work with sport example as an interviewer within football so I also can see the world.