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Hallo Teens
I would like to tell you about my vacation in Florida. I have been missing you. I returned to England one week ago. I had a good trip to Florida, but the hotel was awful. I could not stand the smell, and the food tasted bad. I had tomato soup for dinner every day, and I do not even like tomato soup. Now I am going to tell about all the good things that happened on my vacation. I met a guy in the swimming pool, and he was so handsome and sweet. I asked him for his cellphone number, and he wrote it down on a note. He sent me a beautiful smile, and I saw his pretty teeth. I think the meeting between me and him is a very important part of my life because he was the first person to make me feel happy. He said his name was Tommy, and he was Canadian. We had a lot of fun, and I did not lack things to do. We agreed to get married because we were so in love. Of course, I really liked him, but I could not forgive myself for being so stupid. I believed in every word he said. I found out that he was cheating on me with another girl. It totally broke my heart. He kept asking me for money I gave him some because he said that he was in need. One day he just left without saying goodbye I was devastated. Love makes you blind. You have to be careful when you fall in love and remember do not believe everything other people tell you. Maybe I was stupid, but I had my lesson. From now on, I only rely on myself. I have not seen Tommy for a while, and if you answer me if I want to see him the answer Is no. I am pleased to have the opportunity to write this article. I hope you do not end up in the same stupid situation. I hope you are a bit cleverer than I was.
Best regards
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Svar #1
03. februar 2012 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
Her er et par ting:
I think the meeting between me and him is a very important part of my life ...
I have not seen Tommy for a while, and if you answer ask me if I want to see him, the answer is no.
Svar #3
04. februar 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Beømmelse?? ......den er ikke dårlig, -måske et lille 10tal.
"vacation" er amerikansk, ikke engelsk, hvor ordet er "holiday".
Verbet "tell" kan kun bruges hvis der er a) et hensynsled eller b) et genstandsled som ikke er en that-sætning.
"on my vacation" = during my vacation/holiday
"guy" er amerikansk
"cell phone" (i to ord) er amerikansk, ikke engelsk, hvor det hedder "mobile phone"
a "note" er en besked. En seddel er "a piece of paper"
I believed (in) every word he said.
"He kept asking me for money and I gave him some"
"because he said that he (was in need) needed it"
"One day he just left without saying goodbye and I was devastated"
"You have to be careful when you fall in love and (remember do) make sure you don't believe everything other people tell you"
"Maybe I was stupid, but I (had my) learnt a lesson. From now on(,) I shall only (rely on) trust myself."
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