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Mini engelsk stil hjælp
Jeg har skrevet en mine (engelsk) stil på 156 ord. håber der er nogle som gider at læse den og fortælle mig om der er nogle fejl (især grammatik) :)?
When I was 12 my father left home. When I turned 13 my mother found a new man, and he used to beat her. As if was not enough, he also raped me regularly. I couldn’t take this anymore. I remember that I said to my mother: “You have to get rid of this man, either he goes or I go” her answer was so unexpected, since my mother chose him instead of me. She didn’t found it difficult to choose between her own daughter and a man who she didn’t even know for a year. Who would have thought so? Definitely not me. After that day I landed on the streets. I end up living with other young people who were like me… but after a while she came back to me, said that she was sorry and wanted me to come back home. The best of the all was that she had left him…
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25. november 2013 af xt (Slettet)
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When I was 12 years old my father left home. But when I turned 13 my mother found a new man, who used to beat her. As if that wasn't enough, he also raped me regularly. I couldn't take it anymore. I remember telling her to get rid of this man, either he should go or i would. Her answer was unexpected, cause she chose him instead of me. It wasn't difficult for her to choose between her own daughter and a man she haven't known for even a year! Who would have thought that? Definitely not me. I didn't have any place to go. Not any friends or family. So after that day i started living on the streets, with other young people who were just like me. But it didn't go to long before she came back for me, asking me to forgive her and come back home with her. I was happy, but best of all; she had finally left him.
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