Engelsk stil - smoking ban

hej Studieportalen.
Jeg er i gang med at skrive en engelsk stil om rygeforbud i England og jeg har netop færdiggjort min konklussion. Jeg har altid haft lidt svært ved det grammatiske så jeg ville bare spørge om der ikke var en der kunne se på den se om det ser rigtigt ud


smoking ban - uddrag:
As years have past the mysteries of smoking have been discovered and it is now well documented how dangerous smoking is. Another factor is the rising number of trustworthy analyses and surveys made point out the effectiveness of smoking bans. This leads to my final conclusion that perhaps it was a good time for Britain to follow in the successful footsteps of other nations.

på forhånd tak.

Nikolaj.