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Hej. Jeg er nød til at have en andens vurdering af dette (ikke færdige) essay af en novelle; gerne med fokus på grammatikken!

På forhånd tak, Mvh Jakob.

This story is about a boy named George, who is misbehaving in school. His family obviously aren't very wealthy in money- or love (according to when George's mother talks about how she's going to beat her son up later on). And it seems like George's mother is the only one in this family who is trying to make a living. Maybe because she is a single mother?
She is at the office of the headmistress of this school. The headmistress is a very strict and conservative person. No mediocrity at her school! Actually she is being a little like the tv-character Mrs. Hyacint; Always looking down on the middle class society while blessing her own existence of wealth. The headmistress tells about how he is being an uncrontrollable devil. And she is also complaining about the way George's mother is raising her child; in her opinion women who have a child aren't supposed to work anywhere at anytime except at home. As a matter of fact she is being rather cruel to George's mother telling her of like that. George's mother really doesn't know what the headmistress is talking about. She says he is a very nice and delightful boy at home. Always doing what he is told, always a smile on his face. Nothing to complain about!