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"Paradise Island" engelsk stil
11. juni 2007 af
Rosalou (Slettet)
Hej alle sammen.
Jeg har hele dagen i dag siddet herhjemme og kæmpet med en lille engelsk stil. Jeg har selv prøvet at rette den igennem et par gange, men jeg ville være meget taknemmeligt hvis du ville læse den igennem, og se om der var et par tydelige fejl :)
Paradise Island
I woke up, when a man with flowers around his neck and a very distinctive face stood in front of me.
“Do you want something to drink?” he asked, and looked very relaxed.
“Where am I?” I said, and the man giggled loud.
“Hah, you are on a island in Turkey. On this island, you can do whatever you want. Nobody will stop you. Welcome to Paradise Island! You can always contact me if you got questions about anything, just ask for Jehad” and then he walked away with a big smile on his lips. I felt the warm sand between my feeds, and looked around me. The ocean was crystal blue, and the sun reflected in it. The children’s where diving and playing in the cold water and suddenly a little mulatto boy shout after me.
“You need to see this!” without a thought, I was on my way out to see what he would show me.
“Look!” he gave me his swim goggles and pointed at the water.
Many different fish’s swam around my legs, and had the most beautiful colours I ever had seen. Suddenly I saw a big turtle a few meters under me. It was very touching and overwhelming.
Some hours later, I contacted Jehad. I asked him for a place where I could eat and Jehad suggested that we could eat lunch together. He owned the only restaurant, that exist on the island. It was a comfortable, idyllic place in the jungle, with pink and red flowers all over. The sun shined trough the many palms, and the mood was great. Jehad told me about the culture, the population, and a history about Paradise Island. A myth says, that Cleopatra once had told her lover, that she wanted her own Paradise island with real sand from the Egypt. So her lover transported sand all the way from Egypt to this little island in Turkey. Very romantic - but nobody knows if the story is true or not.
The food on the restaurant were impressive. I got a big watermelon that were hollow out and filled up with fresh berry’s. It was so delicious. The birds sang and flew over the little restaurant, and everyone who ate lunch where laughing and smiling. I wish I could stay here forever..
Suddenly I could here cars, and lawn mowers. People where talking loud about stress, work and all the things they needed to do before the day were gone. I could smell burgers and French fries, and found it very confusing. Then I opened my eyes. I looked around and got surprised when I find out that I were laying in my garden in Denmark.
5 minutes away from the stress with dreams about my future.
My mom stood in front of me and said:
“Do you want something to drink?”
På forhånd tak..
Jeg har hele dagen i dag siddet herhjemme og kæmpet med en lille engelsk stil. Jeg har selv prøvet at rette den igennem et par gange, men jeg ville være meget taknemmeligt hvis du ville læse den igennem, og se om der var et par tydelige fejl :)
Paradise Island
I woke up, when a man with flowers around his neck and a very distinctive face stood in front of me.
“Do you want something to drink?” he asked, and looked very relaxed.
“Where am I?” I said, and the man giggled loud.
“Hah, you are on a island in Turkey. On this island, you can do whatever you want. Nobody will stop you. Welcome to Paradise Island! You can always contact me if you got questions about anything, just ask for Jehad” and then he walked away with a big smile on his lips. I felt the warm sand between my feeds, and looked around me. The ocean was crystal blue, and the sun reflected in it. The children’s where diving and playing in the cold water and suddenly a little mulatto boy shout after me.
“You need to see this!” without a thought, I was on my way out to see what he would show me.
“Look!” he gave me his swim goggles and pointed at the water.
Many different fish’s swam around my legs, and had the most beautiful colours I ever had seen. Suddenly I saw a big turtle a few meters under me. It was very touching and overwhelming.
Some hours later, I contacted Jehad. I asked him for a place where I could eat and Jehad suggested that we could eat lunch together. He owned the only restaurant, that exist on the island. It was a comfortable, idyllic place in the jungle, with pink and red flowers all over. The sun shined trough the many palms, and the mood was great. Jehad told me about the culture, the population, and a history about Paradise Island. A myth says, that Cleopatra once had told her lover, that she wanted her own Paradise island with real sand from the Egypt. So her lover transported sand all the way from Egypt to this little island in Turkey. Very romantic - but nobody knows if the story is true or not.
The food on the restaurant were impressive. I got a big watermelon that were hollow out and filled up with fresh berry’s. It was so delicious. The birds sang and flew over the little restaurant, and everyone who ate lunch where laughing and smiling. I wish I could stay here forever..
Suddenly I could here cars, and lawn mowers. People where talking loud about stress, work and all the things they needed to do before the day were gone. I could smell burgers and French fries, and found it very confusing. Then I opened my eyes. I looked around and got surprised when I find out that I were laying in my garden in Denmark.
5 minutes away from the stress with dreams about my future.
My mom stood in front of me and said:
“Do you want something to drink?”
På forhånd tak..
Svar #2
11. juni 2007 af pssc (Slettet)
Hej! Jeg vil da gerne forsøge, men efter en laaang dag med ond eksamenslæsning garanterer jeg ikke for kvaliteten ;-)
Paradise Island
I woke up,*IKKE KOMMA HER when a man with flowers around his neck and a very distinctive face stood in front of me.
“Do you want something to drink?” *EVT KOMMA HER he asked,*IKKE KOMMA HER - MANGLENDE SUBJEKT and looked very relaxed.
“Where am I?”*EVT KOMMA HER I said, and the man giggled loud.
“Hah*IKKE DETSIDSTE H, you are on a island in Turkey. On this island, you can do whatever you want. Nobody will stop you. Welcome to Paradise Island! You can always contact me if you got questions about anything,*EVT SEMIKOLON ELLER - just ask for Jehad” and then he walked away with a big smile on his lips*ON HIS FACE ER MÅSKE BEDRE. I felt the warm sand between my feeds*FEET!!!, and looked around me*DROP ME. The ocean was crystal blue, and the sun reflected in it. The children’s *kUN CHILDREN!where*WERE! diving and playing in the cold water and *I STEDET FOR AND KUNNE DU BRUGE WHEN suddenly a little mulatto boy shout *SHOUTED DA DU SKRIVER I DATIDafter me.*eVT. KOLON I STEDET FOR PUNKTUM
“You need to see this!” without a thought, I was on my way out to see *WHAT IT WAS HE WANTED TO SHOW ME...JEG TROR DU HAR OVERSAT DIREKTE FRA DANSK, MEN DE ENGELSKE MODALVERBER ER LIDT DRILSKE TIL TIDER;-)what he would show me.
“Look!” he *STORT H I "HE" gave me his swim *DIVING GOGGLES goggles and pointed at the water.
Many different fish’s *KUN FISH swam around my legs, and *DU KUNNE SKRIVE ....MY LEGS; THEY HAD THE MOST.... had the most beautiful colours I ever had seen. Suddenly *KOMMA HER I saw a big turtle a few meters under me. It was *A very touching and overwhelming *EXPERIENCE.
Some hours later, I contacted Jehad. I asked him for a place where I could *GET SOMETHING TO EAT??? eat*KOMMA HER and Jehad suggested that we could eat EVT HAVE lunch together. He owned the only restaurant,*IKKE KOMMA HER (that exist)SLET EVT DETTE on the island. It was a comfortable, idyllic place in the jungle,*IKKE KOMMA HER with pink and red flowers all over. The sun shined trough*STAVES "THROUGH" DET DU HAR SKREVET SVARER PÅ DANSK TIL ET TRUG SOM DYR ÆDER AF;-) the many palms, and the mood was great. Jehad told me about the culture, the population, and a history about* HVIS DU SIGER OF HER SÅ LAVER DU EN GENETIV, SOM JEG TROR AT DU VIL...? Paradise Island. A myth says,*IKKE KOMMA HER that Cleopatra once had told her lover,*IKKE KOMMA HER that she wanted her own Paradise island with real sand from the*IKKE THE! EGYPT ER ET "PROPER NOUN OG TAGER IKKE ARTIKKEL (THE/A) Egypt. So her lover transported sand all the way from Egypt to this little island in Turkey. Very romantic - but nobody knows if the story is true or not.
The food on*AT I STEDET FOR ON the restaurant were*FOOD ER ENTAL - SÅ FOR AT SKABE KONGRUENS SKAL DU BRUGE WAS impressive. I got a big watermelon that were*IGEN WAS FOR AT SKABE KONGRUENS - ELLER CONCORD SOM DET KALDES PÅ ENGELSK hollow out*....THAT HAD BEEN HOLLOWED OUT and filled up*UNDLAD EVENTUELT with fresh berry’s*DU LAVER EN GENETIV ELLER EJEFALD VED AT SÆTTE 'S PÅ. eNGELSKE ORD SOM ENDER PÅ Y ÆNDRER OFTE STAVEMÅDE I FLERTAL: ENTAL=BERRY....FLERTAL=BERRIES. It was so delicious. The birds sang and flew over the little restaurant, and everyone who ate lunch*EVT ...WHO HAD LUNCH THERE where*!!WERE laughing and smiling. I wish*WISHED DA DI SKRIVER I DATID I could stay here*THERE FORDI DU SKRIVER I DATID - SÅ FOR AT TEKSTEN ER "LOGISK" SKAL REFERENCEN TIL STEDET WÆRE DER OG IKKE HER; ALTSÅ THERE forever..
Suddenly*KOMMA HER I could here*HEAR cars,*IKKE KOMMA and lawn mowers. People where*WERE talking loud*LOUDLY about stress, work and all the things they needed to do before the day were gone*...DAY WAS OVER. I could smell burgers and French fries,*IKKE KOMMA HER and found it very confusing. Then I opened my eyes. I looked around and got surprised when I find*FOUND out that I were*WAS laying*LYING - BRUG KUN LAY NÅR DET ER ET OBJEKT in my garden in Denmark.
5 minutes away from the*IKKE THE stress with dreams about my future.
My mom stood in front of me and said:
“Do you want something to drink?”
Paradise Island
I woke up,*IKKE KOMMA HER when a man with flowers around his neck and a very distinctive face stood in front of me.
“Do you want something to drink?” *EVT KOMMA HER he asked,*IKKE KOMMA HER - MANGLENDE SUBJEKT and looked very relaxed.
“Where am I?”*EVT KOMMA HER I said, and the man giggled loud.
“Hah*IKKE DETSIDSTE H, you are on a island in Turkey. On this island, you can do whatever you want. Nobody will stop you. Welcome to Paradise Island! You can always contact me if you got questions about anything,*EVT SEMIKOLON ELLER - just ask for Jehad” and then he walked away with a big smile on his lips*ON HIS FACE ER MÅSKE BEDRE. I felt the warm sand between my feeds*FEET!!!, and looked around me*DROP ME. The ocean was crystal blue, and the sun reflected in it. The children’s *kUN CHILDREN!where*WERE! diving and playing in the cold water and *I STEDET FOR AND KUNNE DU BRUGE WHEN suddenly a little mulatto boy shout *SHOUTED DA DU SKRIVER I DATIDafter me.*eVT. KOLON I STEDET FOR PUNKTUM
“You need to see this!” without a thought, I was on my way out to see *WHAT IT WAS HE WANTED TO SHOW ME...JEG TROR DU HAR OVERSAT DIREKTE FRA DANSK, MEN DE ENGELSKE MODALVERBER ER LIDT DRILSKE TIL TIDER;-)what he would show me.
“Look!” he *STORT H I "HE" gave me his swim *DIVING GOGGLES goggles and pointed at the water.
Many different fish’s *KUN FISH swam around my legs, and *DU KUNNE SKRIVE ....MY LEGS; THEY HAD THE MOST.... had the most beautiful colours I ever had seen. Suddenly *KOMMA HER I saw a big turtle a few meters under me. It was *A very touching and overwhelming *EXPERIENCE.
Some hours later, I contacted Jehad. I asked him for a place where I could *GET SOMETHING TO EAT??? eat*KOMMA HER and Jehad suggested that we could eat EVT HAVE lunch together. He owned the only restaurant,*IKKE KOMMA HER (that exist)SLET EVT DETTE on the island. It was a comfortable, idyllic place in the jungle,*IKKE KOMMA HER with pink and red flowers all over. The sun shined trough*STAVES "THROUGH" DET DU HAR SKREVET SVARER PÅ DANSK TIL ET TRUG SOM DYR ÆDER AF;-) the many palms, and the mood was great. Jehad told me about the culture, the population, and a history about* HVIS DU SIGER OF HER SÅ LAVER DU EN GENETIV, SOM JEG TROR AT DU VIL...? Paradise Island. A myth says,*IKKE KOMMA HER that Cleopatra once had told her lover,*IKKE KOMMA HER that she wanted her own Paradise island with real sand from the*IKKE THE! EGYPT ER ET "PROPER NOUN OG TAGER IKKE ARTIKKEL (THE/A) Egypt. So her lover transported sand all the way from Egypt to this little island in Turkey. Very romantic - but nobody knows if the story is true or not.
The food on*AT I STEDET FOR ON the restaurant were*FOOD ER ENTAL - SÅ FOR AT SKABE KONGRUENS SKAL DU BRUGE WAS impressive. I got a big watermelon that were*IGEN WAS FOR AT SKABE KONGRUENS - ELLER CONCORD SOM DET KALDES PÅ ENGELSK hollow out*....THAT HAD BEEN HOLLOWED OUT and filled up*UNDLAD EVENTUELT with fresh berry’s*DU LAVER EN GENETIV ELLER EJEFALD VED AT SÆTTE 'S PÅ. eNGELSKE ORD SOM ENDER PÅ Y ÆNDRER OFTE STAVEMÅDE I FLERTAL: ENTAL=BERRY....FLERTAL=BERRIES. It was so delicious. The birds sang and flew over the little restaurant, and everyone who ate lunch*EVT ...WHO HAD LUNCH THERE where*!!WERE laughing and smiling. I wish*WISHED DA DI SKRIVER I DATID I could stay here*THERE FORDI DU SKRIVER I DATID - SÅ FOR AT TEKSTEN ER "LOGISK" SKAL REFERENCEN TIL STEDET WÆRE DER OG IKKE HER; ALTSÅ THERE forever..
Suddenly*KOMMA HER I could here*HEAR cars,*IKKE KOMMA and lawn mowers. People where*WERE talking loud*LOUDLY about stress, work and all the things they needed to do before the day were gone*...DAY WAS OVER. I could smell burgers and French fries,*IKKE KOMMA HER and found it very confusing. Then I opened my eyes. I looked around and got surprised when I find*FOUND out that I were*WAS laying*LYING - BRUG KUN LAY NÅR DET ER ET OBJEKT in my garden in Denmark.
5 minutes away from the*IKKE THE stress with dreams about my future.
My mom stood in front of me and said:
“Do you want something to drink?”
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