Stil på engelsk ?!

Hej, jeg har skrevet denne stil, og jeg ville spørge om der ikke var nogen som kunne rette den, og give mig nogen idéer til hvad jeg ellers skal skrive, og ikke skrive, hehe :) ?!

Hola mom

Collin and I are having a great time in Spain, thank you so much for letting us go. We take to the beach every day, and yes we do remember the sunscreen. It’s in fact steaming here; last time I checked it was 45 degree!
I have seen a lot of tourist attractions, like Real Madrid’s football arena, the well-known bullfighting, Centro de Arte Reina Sofia (that’s a large museum in Madrid), churches, flamenco artists, castles and so much more. But I can tell you all about that, when I come home. I have also shopped a lot, and I have bought a lot of gifts to you and the rest of the folks. The hotel is in truth luxury. They have a huge swimming pool, there own (motions center), a massage clinic 8og så videre).
I have as well sent you pictures of Collin and me, in your mailbox. Hope u like theme.
I just adore the culture and the sentiment in Spain, but I must confess I do miss the nice chilly Denmark.