Engelsk stil.

Hej..

Jeg laver altid fejl, når jeg skal bruge by, og hernede kan I vel se mine fejl. Jeg ved godt at teksten er langt, men hvis nogen af jer havde lyst til at læse det og fortælle mig mine fejl, og hvordan jeg kan lade være med at lave de fejl igen, kunne være dejlig.


The weather was wonderful, the sun shined and the wind was blowing slowly. My friends and I were happy we talked, laughed and told jokes to each other. We had really fun. We saw the bus driving slowly, so we began to go to the edge of a cliff, where the bus was coming. The bus stopped and we went inside the bus. When all of us were inside the bus, some masked men surrounded the bus. Some of them came inside the bus, and warned us not to move, or do anything, or else they will shoot us. All this happened so fast, that I did not had time to think or get scared. I did not feel that the bus was surrounded, and even not when they came inside the bus. At that, moment where the masked men came inside the bus and some of the girls in the front seats shouted. I felt that something was wrong. There I saw five masked men, who were warning us. I thought I was dreaming, but later on, I found out that it was reality, and not fantasy. I was scared, but I did not cry like the other girls. Some time I feel that I am a boy not a girl. Those girls who were crying, they got scold, from the masked men. I was holding my friend in my arms, and comforted her, I got scold because of that, from the masked men. I was so angry. They entered in our bus, and they were behaving so badly. If I could, I would have strangled all of them. We were sitting like that in the bus, in one hour. They did not do anything, just telling us off when we moved us a little bit, or when we made sounds. I could not see what they were doing out side the bus. A little bit later, I saw them speak in a mobile phone. My mother always told me to be brave, seldom I am a girl. How can I be brave in this situation? I asked myself. I must not cry, and I must help my friend, that is what I can do. After a couple of minutes, some few helicopters came and were flying over the bus, in a circle. I got happy, when I saw them, I was sure that they were come to save us from these bandits. “Kathy we are going to be saved, stop crying now,” I whispered to my friend. I thought she will stop crying, but it got worse. One of the masked men came and raised Kathy, and shouted, “Child stop crying.” Kathy screamed and hit him, he got angry, and threw her down. She cried I tried to go to her, but another masked men came and said, “Sit down, or it will happen the same to you.” He was commanding, the other men took Kathy out of the bus. I tried to run after them, but they stopped me. “Hey were are you taking her, stop she will not do it again,” I screamed. “Sit down girl,” another ordered. I sat down. Out of the window I could see, that the men was taking her to some other men. They laughed, and one of them slapped her. I could not bear it anymore I could not stop it. I cried, and cried until I could not breathe. After a couple of minutes, I saw that Kathy was putted in the middle, and a man was holding a pistol at her temple. I got scared they were warning the security. Nothing happened, the helicopters fly back home, and it got dark outside.
Suddenly we heard shoots, and I screamed I thought they had shoot Kathy. But there were more people out side. I could not see Kathy. Some few other men came inside of the bus they were not masked. They arrested the masked men, and took them out. “Drive them to the police station, and do it quick,” one of them said to the driver. I run to the man, “my friend Kathy she is with them we can not drive without her.” I said. “Do not worry about her she is in safe,” he said and went. The door was closed, and the bus droved us back to home, back to our family, back to there we were in safe.

Mange tak..