Problemer med sproget

Hej, jeg har virkelig problemer..
Vil I ikke være sød at hjælpe mig med at rette denne tekst? På forhånd tak :)

I think that the people who benefits from backpacker tourism are the individuals who travel – tourism. But first and foremost I think the persons, who own the pizza-, milkshakes-, and wine bars, and the airplane companies – the investors, are the winners. They know that the tourism is bad for nature and national feeling in the new countries, but they make themselves believe that they are doing the right (money), by give the country more money and work. But the question is: “Didn’t the native citizens make fine without the money before the tourism came?”
A sad thing about backpacking is that no place can be secret for the men with money. Money is the key to happiness. Fore every single year there will come more and more travellers and it’s a shame. And when the local citizens in a new founded place, imagine that they can make money on tourists, the place will no more be a nature of paradise, but paradise hotel for young men.