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02. december 2007 af
BGXD (Slettet)
Hej. Jeg har skrevet denne her, men jeg er ikke sikker å om det er korrekt skrevet. Der er sted i teksten hvor den her kommer. Det er fordi jeg ikke ved hvor dan man siger hos på eng.
Michael is a poof, he likes being a poof, and he likes being different. When he was younger, he had not many friends, as other children. Other children always teased him, but he had a friend, a boy named Billy Elliot. The only friend he had, and they are still friends.
Michael lives in London in a house with his boyfriend Alex. Michael is 25 years old, and is the boss of a hairdresser’s. He owns the hairdresser’s. He has a better life now, than he had for eight years. Michael grew up at a place, where nobody would accept you, if you was a gay. But in his new home in London everybody accepts him, almost everybody accept him as he is. The best thing is that his workers and his colleagues accepts him. Sometime he gets humiliated, but it is rare.
For two mounts were Alex and Michael in a pup. They enjoyed their wine, drank and had fun. A few gangster guys about 18 - 19 years sat next by their table. Michael and Alex started their romance. One of the gangster guys shouted angrily! Fuck off your bloody gays. Michael and Alex were lost in them self, and could not hear anything. Another guy from another table yelled, it is not your home, we have right to behave, as we want to. The gangster guy said, shut up your chicken, to the guy. The gangster guys surrounded Michael and Alex’s table. Michael and Alex stood up, but they did not know what there was going on. What is going on here? Asked Alex. One of the gangster guys was holding a threatening fist in front of Jacob, while he was holding Jacob’s shirt with another hand. And while he did it, he whispered, I said, get lost your bloody poof, in Jacobs ear. Another guys came to save Michael and Alex. As they came, all the guys started fighting. A fist hit Michaels nose, and he pass out.
Things like that has happened a few times since his day of arrival. It hurts him, when other gets hurt because of him. They do not go to pubs that much, they even do not have time for going there. They are very busy.
Since Michael came in London, he feels him self a little bit normal, than he ever had felt. Michael and Alex were studying at the same hairdresser school. At the beginning they did not talk with each other at all. They began talking to each other, when they started working together at the same hairdresser’s. Michael was not attracted by Alex at all, Michael was more attracted by Billy. Billy was attracted by a female named Melanie. Michael had no chance Billy. So he decided to find a partner, because he was very lonely. So Michael and Alex spent some quality time together And after a month they mowed in together. They wants to marry and live as husband and wife. Like other normal people do, but they have to live as husband and husband. And who would like to come to their wedding? They wants to live as a family with kids. But it sounds so endless. And the British society has not used to gay families yet. Their sure on one thing, and that is that dreams never will be fulfilled. It is the consequence of being different.
Alex looks really like a gay, but Michael dose not. Because of that, choose Alex to work in a restaurant as a chef. A period of two years worked Alex in the hairdresser’s. He could feel that the customers did not wanted him to cut their hair especially old men. Michael has only worked in a year, after the year he became the boss. In that year has not he noticed anything.
Sometimes hates Michael being different, he can not change his personality, he is a gay, and he is gonna be a gay in the future too. The world is very unfair, and who can change the world? No one.
Michael is a poof, he likes being a poof, and he likes being different. When he was younger, he had not many friends, as other children. Other children always teased him, but he had a friend, a boy named Billy Elliot. The only friend he had, and they are still friends.
Michael lives in London in a house with his boyfriend Alex. Michael is 25 years old, and is the boss of a hairdresser’s. He owns the hairdresser’s. He has a better life now, than he had for eight years. Michael grew up at a place, where nobody would accept you, if you was a gay. But in his new home in London everybody accepts him, almost everybody accept him as he is. The best thing is that his workers and his colleagues accepts him. Sometime he gets humiliated, but it is rare.
For two mounts were Alex and Michael in a pup. They enjoyed their wine, drank and had fun. A few gangster guys about 18 - 19 years sat next by their table. Michael and Alex started their romance. One of the gangster guys shouted angrily! Fuck off your bloody gays. Michael and Alex were lost in them self, and could not hear anything. Another guy from another table yelled, it is not your home, we have right to behave, as we want to. The gangster guy said, shut up your chicken, to the guy. The gangster guys surrounded Michael and Alex’s table. Michael and Alex stood up, but they did not know what there was going on. What is going on here? Asked Alex. One of the gangster guys was holding a threatening fist in front of Jacob, while he was holding Jacob’s shirt with another hand. And while he did it, he whispered, I said, get lost your bloody poof, in Jacobs ear. Another guys came to save Michael and Alex. As they came, all the guys started fighting. A fist hit Michaels nose, and he pass out.
Things like that has happened a few times since his day of arrival. It hurts him, when other gets hurt because of him. They do not go to pubs that much, they even do not have time for going there. They are very busy.
Since Michael came in London, he feels him self a little bit normal, than he ever had felt. Michael and Alex were studying at the same hairdresser school. At the beginning they did not talk with each other at all. They began talking to each other, when they started working together at the same hairdresser’s. Michael was not attracted by Alex at all, Michael was more attracted by Billy. Billy was attracted by a female named Melanie. Michael had no chance Billy. So he decided to find a partner, because he was very lonely. So Michael and Alex spent some quality time together And after a month they mowed in together. They wants to marry and live as husband and wife. Like other normal people do, but they have to live as husband and husband. And who would like to come to their wedding? They wants to live as a family with kids. But it sounds so endless. And the British society has not used to gay families yet. Their sure on one thing, and that is that dreams never will be fulfilled. It is the consequence of being different.
Alex looks really like a gay, but Michael dose not. Because of that, choose Alex to work in a restaurant as a chef. A period of two years worked Alex in the hairdresser’s. He could feel that the customers did not wanted him to cut their hair especially old men. Michael has only worked in a year, after the year he became the boss. In that year has not he noticed anything.
Sometimes hates Michael being different, he can not change his personality, he is a gay, and he is gonna be a gay in the future too. The world is very unfair, and who can change the world? No one.
Svar #1
09. december 2007 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)
Michael is a poof, it may be a poof, and it might be otherwise. When he was younger, he had not many friends, as other children. Other children always teased him, but he had a friend, a boy named Billy Elliot. The only friend he had, and they are still friends.
Michael lives in London in a house with his friend Alex. Michael is 25 years old and is the head of a hairdressing salons. He has the hairdressing salons. He now has a better life when he was eight years old. Michael grew up in a place where no one would accept you if you have a gay. But in his new home in London all accepted him, almost everyone accept him as he is. The best thing is that his workers and his colleagues accepted him. Eventually he gets humiliated, but it is rare.
For two camps were Alex and Michael in a puppy. They enjoyed their wine, drank and had fun. A couple of gangsters guys on 18-19 years set by their table. Michael and Alex, began their romance. One of the boys shouted angry gangsters! Fuck your bloody gays. Michael and Alex were lost in themselves, and could not hear. Another man from another table shouted, she is not at home, we have right to behave as we wish. The gangsters man said, quit your chickens, the boys. The gangster boys surrounded Michael and Alex table. Michael and Alex were, but they did not know what it was. What's going on here? Alex asked. One of the boys was gangsters, the threat of a fist in front of Jacob, while he was Jacob's shirt with one hand. And while he did it, he whispered, "I lost your bloody poof, Jacobs ear. Another boys came to save Michael and Alex. As they arrived, all the boys started fighting. A fist hit Michaels nose, and he passed through.
Things like that happened a few times since his arrival. It hurts him when others injured, because of him. They do not go to pubs that much, they even do not have time to go. You are very busy.
Since Michael was in London, he feels himself a little more normal than he ever had. Michael and Alex were studied at the same hairdressing school. At first they did not talk with each other at all. They began to talk to them if they work together at the same hairdresser. Michael was not attracted to Alex to all, Michael was more attracted to Billy. Billy was moved by a woman named Melanie. Michael had no chance (with/to) Billy. So he decided to find a partner, because he was very lonely. , So Michael and Alex spent some quality time together, and after a month it mowed. She wants to marry and live as man and wife. Like other normal people do, but they have to live as husband and husband. And who would want their wedding? They want to live as a family with children. But it sounds so endless. And the British company has not used yet gay families. My sure of a thing, and that is that dreams are not fulfilled. It is the result that different.
Alex really looks like a gay, but Michael dose. For this reason, choose Alex to work in a restaurant as a cook. A period of two years Alex worked in a hairdresser. He might believe that customers did not want him to cut their hair before all old men. Michael has only one year, after the year he was appointed chief. This year, he has not noticed anything.
Sometimes Michael hates being different, he can not change his personality that he is gay, and he is a gay and in the future. The World is very unjust, and who can change the world? Nobody.
Michael lives in London in a house with his friend Alex. Michael is 25 years old and is the head of a hairdressing salons. He has the hairdressing salons. He now has a better life when he was eight years old. Michael grew up in a place where no one would accept you if you have a gay. But in his new home in London all accepted him, almost everyone accept him as he is. The best thing is that his workers and his colleagues accepted him. Eventually he gets humiliated, but it is rare.
For two camps were Alex and Michael in a puppy. They enjoyed their wine, drank and had fun. A couple of gangsters guys on 18-19 years set by their table. Michael and Alex, began their romance. One of the boys shouted angry gangsters! Fuck your bloody gays. Michael and Alex were lost in themselves, and could not hear. Another man from another table shouted, she is not at home, we have right to behave as we wish. The gangsters man said, quit your chickens, the boys. The gangster boys surrounded Michael and Alex table. Michael and Alex were, but they did not know what it was. What's going on here? Alex asked. One of the boys was gangsters, the threat of a fist in front of Jacob, while he was Jacob's shirt with one hand. And while he did it, he whispered, "I lost your bloody poof, Jacobs ear. Another boys came to save Michael and Alex. As they arrived, all the boys started fighting. A fist hit Michaels nose, and he passed through.
Things like that happened a few times since his arrival. It hurts him when others injured, because of him. They do not go to pubs that much, they even do not have time to go. You are very busy.
Since Michael was in London, he feels himself a little more normal than he ever had. Michael and Alex were studied at the same hairdressing school. At first they did not talk with each other at all. They began to talk to them if they work together at the same hairdresser. Michael was not attracted to Alex to all, Michael was more attracted to Billy. Billy was moved by a woman named Melanie. Michael had no chance (with/to) Billy. So he decided to find a partner, because he was very lonely. , So Michael and Alex spent some quality time together, and after a month it mowed. She wants to marry and live as man and wife. Like other normal people do, but they have to live as husband and husband. And who would want their wedding? They want to live as a family with children. But it sounds so endless. And the British company has not used yet gay families. My sure of a thing, and that is that dreams are not fulfilled. It is the result that different.
Alex really looks like a gay, but Michael dose. For this reason, choose Alex to work in a restaurant as a cook. A period of two years Alex worked in a hairdresser. He might believe that customers did not want him to cut their hair before all old men. Michael has only one year, after the year he was appointed chief. This year, he has not noticed anything.
Sometimes Michael hates being different, he can not change his personality that he is gay, and he is a gay and in the future. The World is very unjust, and who can change the world? Nobody.
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