Engelsk
Stil
10. januar 2008 af
Yasin14 (Slettet)
2007
In year 2007 have I it good, because I made a new job, and I starting in a new school, but there was also some bad things, there has been in year 2007, for example, global worming, and war.
There was sketch many things in year 2007, many asset things, and many bad things, they asset thing was, I was in Bornholm along my old school, and I am starting in my new school and got a new friends in my new school, and I made a new job, but I don’t will work there more. One off the good things in year 2007 was that I was in summer-house in Christmas holiday, and it was fun. I was also begun to the scooter driving licence, and I drive continual.
The bad thing was the global worming, and war, and I was not some right place in the summer holidays in year 2007.
I hope that, I take to some place in the summer holidays in year 2008, and I hope that, and I hope the war and global worming will stop!, and I hope they giving me, my driving licence evidence fast.
I hope the consequence in year 2007 will be for me that, I get some good character in year 2008, and I take to some good place in the summer holidays, and they other holidays. I hope that the global worming and war will stop, and get new friends in my new school, and I hope it will be good in winter holidays, when there not are sow many days back, and I hope really that the new year 2008 will be good for us all together!.
In year 2007 have I it good, because I made a new job, and I starting in a new school, but there was also some bad things, there has been in year 2007, for example, global worming, and war.
There was sketch many things in year 2007, many asset things, and many bad things, they asset thing was, I was in Bornholm along my old school, and I am starting in my new school and got a new friends in my new school, and I made a new job, but I don’t will work there more. One off the good things in year 2007 was that I was in summer-house in Christmas holiday, and it was fun. I was also begun to the scooter driving licence, and I drive continual.
The bad thing was the global worming, and war, and I was not some right place in the summer holidays in year 2007.
I hope that, I take to some place in the summer holidays in year 2008, and I hope that, and I hope the war and global worming will stop!, and I hope they giving me, my driving licence evidence fast.
I hope the consequence in year 2007 will be for me that, I get some good character in year 2008, and I take to some good place in the summer holidays, and they other holidays. I hope that the global worming and war will stop, and get new friends in my new school, and I hope it will be good in winter holidays, when there not are sow many days back, and I hope really that the new year 2008 will be good for us all together!.
Svar #2
10. januar 2008 af chinpo (Slettet)
Du skal ikke oprette tråden mere end én gang, folk skal nok se den...! Hvornår skal den afleveres? Jeg har ikke tid til at kigge på den i aften, men jeg kan gøre det i weekenden hvis det kan vente så lang tid?
Jeg har lidt svært ved at huske hvor meget der bliver krævet af én i engelsk i 8. klasse, men som din stil er nu, vil jeg vudere den til 02, måske max 4 hvis din lærer er venlig - men som sagt, er lidt usikker på, hvor meget der forventes på dit klassetrin.
Jeg har lidt svært ved at huske hvor meget der bliver krævet af én i engelsk i 8. klasse, men som din stil er nu, vil jeg vudere den til 02, måske max 4 hvis din lærer er venlig - men som sagt, er lidt usikker på, hvor meget der forventes på dit klassetrin.
Svar #3
10. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
Du kan evt. se lidt på denne rettede udgave, som måske kan indbringe en karakter højere.
2007 was a good year because I had got a new job, and I started in a new school, but there were also some bad things in the year of 2007, such as the global warming and the wars.
There were so many things in 2007; many good things and many bad things. One of the good things was that I was on Bornholm with my old school, and I have started in my new school and got some new friends in my current school. In addition, I have got a new job, but I do not want to work there anymore. One of the good things in the year of 2007 was that I was in summer-house during the Christmas holidays, and it was fun. I have also begun taking the scooter driving license, and I still drive.
The bad things were the coming global warming, the wars, and that I was not the right places in the summer holidays.
I hope that I am going to travel to a nice place in the summer holidays of 2008, and I really hope that the war and the global warming are going to stop! Lastly, I hope I will get my driving license fast.
I hope the consequences of 2007 for will be me that I receive great marks in 2008, and I am going to travel to some fine places in the summer holidays, and the other holidays. I hope that the global warming and the wars will stop, and that I get some new friends in my new school. I hope I will have good winter holidays. I really hope that the new year will be good for all of us!
2007 was a good year because I had got a new job, and I started in a new school, but there were also some bad things in the year of 2007, such as the global warming and the wars.
There were so many things in 2007; many good things and many bad things. One of the good things was that I was on Bornholm with my old school, and I have started in my new school and got some new friends in my current school. In addition, I have got a new job, but I do not want to work there anymore. One of the good things in the year of 2007 was that I was in summer-house during the Christmas holidays, and it was fun. I have also begun taking the scooter driving license, and I still drive.
The bad things were the coming global warming, the wars, and that I was not the right places in the summer holidays.
I hope that I am going to travel to a nice place in the summer holidays of 2008, and I really hope that the war and the global warming are going to stop! Lastly, I hope I will get my driving license fast.
I hope the consequences of 2007 for will be me that I receive great marks in 2008, and I am going to travel to some fine places in the summer holidays, and the other holidays. I hope that the global warming and the wars will stop, and that I get some new friends in my new school. I hope I will have good winter holidays. I really hope that the new year will be good for all of us!
Svar #4
10. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
Hov, jeg kom til at rette 'consequences in 2007' til 'consequences of 2007'. Ret det tilbage. Det i #3 er i øvrigt langt fra fejlfrit.
Svar #5
10. januar 2008 af Yasin14 (Slettet)
ok tak. det er fordi jeg manglede nogle punktummer og komaer, derfor sendte jeg den to gange det må i undskylde.
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