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16. august 2004 af
HeroN (Slettet)
Hej - Jeg har en lille del af min stil jeg er lidt usikker på, så ville se om nogen havde lyst til at kort læse den igennem og evt. Skrive rettelser :)
På forhånd tak. Thomas.
2. My computer has played an important role in the middle of my teenage years due to lack of self-esteem.
My childhood hasn’t been easy and that’s also one of the main reasons for me choosing Stenhus as gymnasium – To get a fresh start.
When I was 14 years old life wasn’t easy and days felt like years,
But after my confirmation I got myself a brand new computer.
I took the computer in my life as my “new friend” and used it to get away from all the misery and pain I went through in that part of my life.
The next two years I berried myself into the world of computers,
It was actually first when my 3rd thing came a long I stopped spending time on my computer and decided to end that part of my life and start a new one.
Though the computer took me more and more away from socializing with my friends it also gave me new friends and I don’t regret that I used 2 years of my life in front of my computer cause I enjoyed it – But I guess it was time to move on and I’m glad that I didn’t continue to spend most of my time on the computer.
På forhånd tak. Thomas.
2. My computer has played an important role in the middle of my teenage years due to lack of self-esteem.
My childhood hasn’t been easy and that’s also one of the main reasons for me choosing Stenhus as gymnasium – To get a fresh start.
When I was 14 years old life wasn’t easy and days felt like years,
But after my confirmation I got myself a brand new computer.
I took the computer in my life as my “new friend” and used it to get away from all the misery and pain I went through in that part of my life.
The next two years I berried myself into the world of computers,
It was actually first when my 3rd thing came a long I stopped spending time on my computer and decided to end that part of my life and start a new one.
Though the computer took me more and more away from socializing with my friends it also gave me new friends and I don’t regret that I used 2 years of my life in front of my computer cause I enjoyed it – But I guess it was time to move on and I’m glad that I didn’t continue to spend most of my time on the computer.
Svar #1
16. august 2004 af Lurch (Slettet)
Her er et par enkelte omskrivelser, der gø sproget lidt pænere. Men ellers fint skrevet! Husk dog på, at man ALDRIG skriver sammantrækninger! det er talesprog og skal ikke bruges på skrift, med mindre man bruger en elelr anden form for dialog
My computer has played an important role during my teenage years due to the lack of self-esteem. My childhood has not been easy and that is also one of the main reasons for me choosing Stenhus gymnasium – To get a fresh start.
When I was 14 years old, life was not easy and days felt like years. But after my confirmation I got myself a brand new computer. I took the computer in to my life as my “new friend” and used it to get away from all the misery and pain I went through at that time of my life. The next two years I buried myself into the world of computers.
It was actually first when my (3rd thing)?? came a long I stopped spending time on my computer and decided to end that part of my life and start a new one. Though the computer kept me more and more from socializing with my friends, it also gave me new friends. I do not regret that I used two years of my life in front of my computer, because I enjoyed it – But I guess it was time to move on and I am glad that I did not continue to spend most of my time on the computer.
My computer has played an important role during my teenage years due to the lack of self-esteem. My childhood has not been easy and that is also one of the main reasons for me choosing Stenhus gymnasium – To get a fresh start.
When I was 14 years old, life was not easy and days felt like years. But after my confirmation I got myself a brand new computer. I took the computer in to my life as my “new friend” and used it to get away from all the misery and pain I went through at that time of my life. The next two years I buried myself into the world of computers.
It was actually first when my (3rd thing)?? came a long I stopped spending time on my computer and decided to end that part of my life and start a new one. Though the computer kept me more and more from socializing with my friends, it also gave me new friends. I do not regret that I used two years of my life in front of my computer, because I enjoyed it – But I guess it was time to move on and I am glad that I did not continue to spend most of my time on the computer.
Svar #2
16. august 2004 af HeroN (Slettet)
Hvor står de forskellige grader folk kan være herinde? :D
Svar #3
16. august 2004 af Lurch (Slettet)
Tror faktisk ikke de er nævnt nogle steder herinde. Det er nu heller ikke så vigtigt:)
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