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My passion.
I spend my time on a lot of different things example.
I play handball, I play in a club that is called Lystrup. I have played handball since I was 10 years old.
I have been goalkeeper in three to four years (her skal du huske, hvilke forholdsord, der har hvilken betydning. Her har du skrevet, at du har været målmand OM 3-4 år) but now I am as a back (I play...og så ved jeg ikke en døjt om håndbold på nogen sprog, så jeg ved ikke om man kan sige "I play back", men det lyder forkert). I can play in all places (når vi snakker sport, tror jeg at pladser på en bane hedder "positions") also as goalkeeper, but I hate being goalkeeper. Most of my family have played handball too or are still playing.
My aunt has been an international (player? spy?) but she had to drop out because of injuries.
My dad has been a member of the Europe team as s (den kan du nok selv greje:) junior player.
A lot of people tell me that I am a good handball player like my dad. The sports (enten snakker du om, at sport generelt betyder meget for dig, og så skal du udelade "the", men næste sætning tyder på, at du mener, at sporten håndbold betyder meget for dig, og så skal du sætte det i ental - husk kongruens i denne og næste sætning) mean a lot to me. I
hate when my team-mates do not take it them seriously.
When I play handball I become a different person. I close my ears and just focused (tid) to play handball, the Only person I listen to is my coach and sometime one of my team-mates. I do no listen to anyone else because I am totally focused on the game.

Besides that, I love water-ski (hvis det er at stå på vandski, du elsker (og ikke bare selve vandskiene), så skal du lave en -ing form af verbet) and kneeboard. I my family we have our own speed boat and it is really nice. Every summer we are (go) on holiday with it and we are sailing (det er en vane, så skal du ikke bruge udvidet tid) at the whole time. We have a cottage by a canal (der skal enten adskillelse eller sammenkædning mellem de to halvdele af denne sætning) it is really nice.

I love animals. I have two dogs, one cat and six horses. I ride my horses so (as) often as possible, some time I competitor in concurrence, and sometimes I wind and sometimes I lose (prøv selv at se på denne sidste sætning).
 

Der er desuden en del steder, hvor sproget ikke er optimalt (ikke direkte forkert, bare ikke optimalt), men der skal jo også være noget at lave for din engelsklærer :)

Generelt er det dog ganske pænt.

tak (:

In my hole live had I had horses, so they mean also a lot in my life. I love to ride at my horse, sometimes I ride at the morning before school, but it is just at the summer because at the winter is it cold and dark. I live at a farm where we have the entire animal at home. So I find that very cool.

EVT RETTTE? så i søde :D

My whole life, I've had horses, so they mean a lot to me. I love to ride my horse, sometimes I ride in the morning before school, but only in the summer, because the winter is too cold and dark. I live on a farm where we have all the animals at home, which I find cool.