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Martin Luther King Jr.
Martin Luther King Jr. was born 15 January 1929 in Atlanta, Georgia.
He was an American clergyman, activist and prominent leader in the African-American civil rights movement. He would secure the progress on civil rights in the United States.
His family was very religious. His father and him was both christian priest.
His fathers name was Martin Luther King and his mothers name was Alberta Williams King. But really was both their names Michael Luther King, until the family traveled to Europa in 1934 and visited Germany. His father changed both their names to Martin Luther King in honor of the German protesant leader Martin Luther.
Martin Luther has also a older sister, she name was Willie Christine King, and also an younger brother, he name was Alfred Daniel Williams King.
28 August 1963
28 August 1963 in Washington DC gave Martin a speech where he tells the World of the injustice, the Afro-American has been through and still were exposed to in United States.
He tells also about his visions, dreams and hopes for the future in the country. And in the speech he said the famous ” I have a dream ”
4 April 1968
4 April 1968 was Martin Luther assassinated in Memphis, Tennesee.
He was assassinated on a hotel balcony by James Earl Ray.
Honor
Presidential Medal of Freedom in 1977 and Congressional Gold Medal in 2004.
Martin Luther Day was made to a United States national holiday in 1986.
And in 1964 he became the youngest person to receive the Nobel Peace Prize.
Svar #1
04. januar 2010 af karamellen2 (Slettet)
I afsnit 1, ville jeg nok skrive .. He wanted to secure the progress of civil rights in the United States (hvis det da er det du mener)
Derudover hedder det: His family were very religious. Him and his father were both Christian priests.
I afsnit to giver din anden sætning ikke meget mening.. Hvis du mener at både Martin Luther og hans far var navngivet Michael luther king, ville jeg nok skrive: Martin was named after his father, and they both used to be named Michael Luther King, until the family travelled to Germany in 1934. His father then changed both their names to Martin Luther King in honer of the German protestand leader Martin Luther..
Jeg ville nok droppe de to undertitler du har, de siger ikke rigtig noget om indholdet i afsnittet, og eftersom din stil er så kort som den er, er der ikke rigtig grund til at dele den op..
I afsnit 3, bør du starte anderledes: On the 28th of August 1963 Martin gave a speech in Washington DC, where he tells the world of the injustice that the afro-american people has experienced and still are exposed to in the United States.
He also talks about his visions, dreams and hopes for the future in the country. He begin his speech with the famous words: "I have a dream".
Afsnit 4 bør du også begynde anderledes, idet der bør stå: On the 4th of April 1968 Martin Luther was..
Men ellers en okay stil, lidt kort, da der er meget at fortælle om Martin Luther King og hans liv.
Svar #2
05. januar 2010 af exatb
Family kan både være ental og flertal. Da det er familien under eet der er religiøs er det korrekt at skrive "His family was very religious"
Flertal ville man anvende ved feks "His family were mebers of different parties" da man her betragter familien som en gruppe af enkeltpersoner.
Svar #3
05. januar 2010 af SimonSylvest (Slettet)
Tak :) Super at der er mennesker som jer som gider at hjælpe (;
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