Engelsk.. mangler lidt gramma kontrol?

Hej, nogen som kan hjælpe mig med at finde de vej som skal rettes, ved hjælp af grammatik og hvorfor?

Er det en stil eller en oversættelse, i så fald - er det muligt at få dig til at læse den danske tekst herind?

Altså det er en dame som med vilje har skrevet ukorekt .. jeg skal bare finde grammatisk fejlende . Hvis du gider at hjælpe?

 How much I have to praise him! How much he has given me! All the time I was making mistakes, all the time I was going off the straight Path and he has given me a chance again and again. This is another chance for me. They took me from the House of Falling Women is destitute hostel in Hazaribagh under the wing of Brother Andrew, who has come here from Canada to save us. A friend of lovely has taken another woman out of there and lovely said: “She is not the only charitable lady in the whole of Dhaka. Let us take another one.“ That’s what she said to her husband. ?In fact her husbands name is Jamshed Rashid, but everyone calls him James. Lovely’s name is Anwara Begum but nobody call her this. Everyone calls her lovely, even own children. She has a house in Dhanmondi. Great place and a good house too. Downstairs is a big room filled with furniture, a television and a VCR. This room is known as the reception room. The little room full of toys and books is the playroom. It’s an entire room for the children to play. The bathroom is downstairs and the kitchen beside it. My room is next to the kitchen. It has electricity.

- Jeg har prøvet på at rette det, sådan som jeg mener det er rigtigt, men det er ret uforståeligt. Sætningen markeret med fed skrift fattede jeg overhovedet ikke, så den må du selv tumle med.

mange tak. Men jeg skal have nogen "beviser" hvor jeg fortæller om fejlende grammatisk forstået?. f.eks. do omskrivningen osv.