engelsk stil afvl. mandag

 Hej, jeg har en opgave i engelsk. Hvor man skal lade som om, at man var til The Rolling Stones, Hyde Park, London, 1969. Jeg har fået skrevet nogle linjer, men tænkte på om i eventuelt ikke kunne hjælpe mig med, at rette den? Og skrive lidt videre. Da jeg er løbet tør, håber i kan hjælpe! ;o) Da jeg ikke er den bedste til engelsk. 

All my friends had bought tickets. I didn’t had so many moneys. Because on that time I was only 15. I actually cried in front of my parents and said: “Oh please mom and daddy, I want to go to the concert. All my friends are going.” My parents said no, but in the end my father had win in lotto, and then he gives me money. There was one day left, but i was lucky and reached it. Everybody was talking about “The Rolling Stones” they were so popular. Me and my friends was near the scene people was crazy and mad about The rolling stones. Girls cried and screamed “ROLLING STONES!!” there was also some people that got a heart attack.