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 Hjælpe med hvad ???????

 at rette den vedhæftet fil:)

 Det er ikke at hjælpe. Det er at gøre arbejdet for dig.

jeg har jo selv skrevet det men vil bare godt ha rettede grammatik og stavefejl

man kan ikke åben din vedhæftet stil

 Michael Jackson
-The king of pop

His childhood
Michael Jackson was born on August 29 in 1958. He was the eighth of ten children in an Afri-can American working-class family. Michael had a very bad relationship with his dad, Michael said that his dad have used him physically and emotionally. Though he give his father credit for playing a big role in his music career. The first time Michael talked loud up about his childhood was in an interview with Oprah Winfrey.

His career
It was at a very young age Michael started his career. In 1964 at a age of 6 he started singing in the band Jackson brothers. At a age of 8 he got the role as a front singer in the band and the group changed name to Jackson 5.
Latter The Rolling Stone magazine described the young Michael as "a prodigy" with "over-whelming musical gifts," writing that he "quickly emerged as the main draw and lead singer.” In 1972 to 1975 he released 4 singles but it was not before 1982 Michael Jackson got his breakthrough in the history where he wrote a song for the movie E.T. and for the videos for the songs “Billie Jean”, “Beat it” and Thriller these videos made him the first black singer with a big population of fans in history and he was the first black man there got his music videos on MTV. Michael didn’t only make himself famous for his music but also for his dance moves like the robot, the moonwalk. In 1984 Michael Jackson won a Grammy for Best Recording for Children. In the same year he won seven Grammys other and eight American Music Awards.

His death
Before his death Michael Jackson had planed 50 concerts I London. He wanted to end his life as the king of pop. The concerts was going to start at the 13 of July 2009 and going to end at the 6 of marts 2010 but they had to cancel because on June 25 in 2009 Michael Jackson died in his bed of a heart attack, they say but they can’t prove it. After Michaels dead they hold a memorial on July 7, 2009, in Los Angeles. Michaels casket was present during the memorial.

mulle00,

While I admire your enthusiasm and burning desire to help others, your "corrected" version is as flawed as the original. Advice on the English language and its intricacies is best left to those properly able to speak it.

Hej Rakijovic 

the "corrected" version is not corrected but juste a cupy because some could not open it 

Hm. One of those (in-)famous "whoops"-moments on my behalf, then. ;)

Remember but; 'tis human to err, but divine to forgive.

 Raki,

Du må ikke glemme at fuldende maximen:  "sed in errore perseverare turpe"        ..........sådan som man jo ofte spontant udbryder.

.......Det er udlagt:  " -men at forblive i fejltagelsen er skændigt "

 Michael Jackson

 Mange gange tak:D