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Samantha Landon 12010 East Cliff Rd. Bar Harbor, Maine 04605, USA. 24th August 2008. To the person who finds this bottle. I'm so glad that you have found my message. I don't know, how long time the bottle has been at the sea, or where it is now. But there's one thing, I know... My life will never be the same as before (Du kan evt. skrive "as it was before"), but to write writing this, makes my heart more peaceful. I am a sixteen years old girl, who has a very weird life. Som people will say, that my life is a terrible life. But my life has always been this way. I've been raped by my father. That's terrible, but it has been like that, since I was five years old. My mother died, when I was four. I pray to her every night. But when my father hears me, he always comes and smack me. I have a little brother. He is 13 years old.. But he doesn't live at home anymore. But sometimes he says hello, when we pass each other at on the street. I can newer never tell this to anyone, that's why I write this. I have no person to talk with, so I hope, that you will take this to you, and help people who also have been raped. I really want my life to be normal, but tomorrow my father and I will move to California. My father says, that it's to start a new life. But I know, that it's just because, some (?, kan evt være someone)  in the neighborhood knows all about my father and I. So to the person who finds this; you can't find me. I don't live at the same address anymore. My father can be really nice. We can go in fun-parks, in the kino, to the park. But the most of the time, it's the demon, that lives in our house. But I love him, he is still my father. I can remember something, my mother said to me, when she still was alive; "I'm sorry, that I choose chose your father, but if you be nice to him, he'll be nice to you. That's the only thing, I can remember from the time with her. But I learnt to stand the pain. And it makes me stronger. I never go to school. My father always needs my helped, and I can never leave him. He would die with out without me. That's the right from me (?). - Samantha Landon

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