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Det ligner mere en øvelse i at oversætte nogle enkeltstående sætninger til engelsk. Om de er oversat korrekt kan man kun afgøre, når man også har kendskab til det dansksprogede forlæg. Her skal antydes nogle grammatiske fejl:

Maureen is a woman who was invited to a Christmas party. She was told that her friend would be present there. Maureen called to him about 3 times. Her friend called him a coward. She called to him so many times. Jess hates to taking to the parties. He makes easily friends. But then he is tried of his friend he wants to keep a distance as he looses his friends??. Martin is a young man who lives with his daughter and wife. Martin`s wife is in a relationship with his best friend. His daughter was killed in a road accident some months before. Martin will commit suicide. His corner?? told them about his sad story. Martin did not commit suicide, because he could not do it. Maureen would like to commit suicide, but she didn`t . She will not die in an accident for example in a train accident, because the driver will feel guilty about it. And she will not die at home because she would like to be found by a stranger. She tried to attempt sucide, but she was still alive. She was admitted to the hospital, and some weeks later she came out. In front of the windue she saw Martin. Maureen went over to him, and she asked ”what are you doing here?”. 
 

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Det kan man da ikke sådan sammenligne. Sproget er underligt og visse steder vanskeligt at forstå.

Dårligt og dårligt ... der er i hvert fald en gavmild portion danismer ("Danglish"). Windue må siges at være den mest smilfremkaldende (vindue / window). Andre steder kan end ikke den bedste clairvoyant gennemskue "lyrikken"; hvad mener du fx med "his corner"? Hans hjørne? His coroner? Hans retsmediciner?