Engelsk stil

Jeg har brug for hjælp til at få sat det første stykke i en ordenlig orden, da jeg kager rundt i det. 
Jeg beder ikke om at få rettet den, men at der er en eller flere har lyst til lige at sige hvad det er jeg skal få rettet op på, da jeg godt selv kan se at det ikke helt går så godt. 

My summer holidays started chill and down on earth. The first two weeks i didn't had something on my plans, so i just spent some time with my sister and my friends. We had rented a house with my aunt, uncle and my cousins in Croatia, and we couldn't wait for the date, where we had planned to leave from Denmark. Four days before the day we would leave, we got a mail from the distribution agency about the house we had rent wasn't ready for us. We were in panic over the situation because we had rent layovers in Germany, Slovenia and Croatia, so we had to find a new house four days before, and that wasn’t easy because everything was already rent.