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Hi Lena,

I'm so excited to see you, your parents and little Adrienne. I am already planning on what we are going to experience together. I have decided, that we're going to Legoland. Legoland is an amazing place for having fun, and it's about 100 km away from where I live. I have never been to Legoland, and I know that you haven't either, so that was the perfect place I could fine. We are travelling on Sunday the 24th December. Your family must be at the train station at 10 am. After we have taking the train, we are going for a walk in about 30 minutes before we arrive to Legoland. When we arrive, the first thing we have to do is to go through the ticket machine and get our tickets. After that, we can have fun. The first thing, we should try is the Legoldmine. From what I've heard from my friends, it's the funniest place in Legoland. After we have tried that, I think it's time for dinner. I have decided, that we will go and eat at a restaurant called "Knight's Restaurant". What my friends have experienced is, that their food is amazing. After dinner, we are having some free time, where we can do whatever we want in Legoland. I chose Legoland, because I know you and your family are going throught a lot. Therefore I think that you and your family need a break from your daily life and should come out and experience new things. I'm still in shock after you told me, that Adrienne has cancer. I could believe it and I began to cry, because I know how much Adrienne means to you and your family. And I know that this trip would mean a lot to Adrienne, because I think this is what she needs. I'm hoping, that your family is excited as much as I am, and we would see each other very soon.

From,

Nina

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